Doug, you are probably right - they were grabs where the composition wasn't thought through - the scene was changing so fast! An almost there I guess. Thanks for the feedback.
Alastair On Nov 6, 2007 2:25 PM, Doug Franklin <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > I like the concept, Alistair, but these two just don't work for me for > some reason. '147 feels to me like it should be narrower, and maybe > taken from a few feet to the left of where you were. '141 ... I don't > know ... it just doesn't click. > > Alastair Robertson wrote: > > Hi Rick > > > > thanks for commenting - it seems people didn't like these much, > > judging by the lack of comments so thanks for the feedback. I guess > > these probably mean more to me than a casual observer, as it sums up > > exactly my memories of walking the streets of Florence. Oh well, > > that's the half the reason I shoot these things - for the memories > > rather than for aclaim! > > > > Alastair > > > > > > On Nov 6, 2007 8:42 AM, Rick Womer <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > >> For me, #1 takes the prize because of the great shadow > >> leading into the frame, with the green cross pulling > >> the eye through the rest of the photo. > >> > >> Rick > >> > >> --- Alastair Robertson <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> > >> wrote: > >> > >>> http://www.pbase.com/kiwibiologist/image/87924141 > >>> http://www.pbase.com/kiwibiologist/image/87924147 > >>> > >>> These two scenes capture one aspect of our Florence > >>> experience - > >>> narrow streets packed with tourists dodging cars, > >>> and late summer sun > >>> flooding in where the stree geometry allows it. The > >>> green cross is of > >>> course a pharmacy - there seems to be one one every > >>> corner. > > > -- > Thanks, > DougF (KG4LMZ) > > -- > > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > [email protected] > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow > the directions. > -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.

