Hi Kenneth,

Thanks for commenting. I take the point about more space to the left.
i would have like the front wheel to be complete at the very least.
There are several more shots some of which might have better framing
in this regard, I might post a few more PESOs...

Cheers,
Eric.

On 14/08/06, Kenneth Waller <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> I agree with Godfrey's observations.
> For me, having more of the image in front of the rider would add to the
> overall feel of motion.
>
> Kenneth Waller
>
> ----- Original Message -----
> From: "Godfrey DiGiorgi" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
> Subject: Re: PESO - Airwaves Ducati
>
>
> > On Aug 14, 2006, at 2:33 AM, Eric Featherstone wrote:
> >> http://www.photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=4801323
> >
> > Quite a nice shot. I like the tight composition overall, although I
> > would try cropping the RH edge in a little tighter as it feels to me
> > that the balance is a little too far left. The tonalities seem a
> > little washed out/bright on my screen. A small adjustment to bring
> > down the curve just a little bit improves it.
> >
> > Godfrey
> >
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