Lovely barn, lovely tree. Sort of agree with Bob about branch right at peak of roof. But what bothers me more is the lighting, bright, bright. Might tone down contrast in PS or redo in later afternoon light. Definitely worth a revisit, good subject matter, and older barns in California are increasingly harder to find. Has lots of potential, texture et all, but I find the brightness distracting. HTH.
Marnie ========== > Jack, > Film! Wow! > Nice setting, but I want to get the oak's branch out of the barn's > roof peak and I have some trouble visually separating the right side > of the tree trunk from the background. Obviously, you have more > framings of this setting? > Regards, Bob S. > > On 8/12/06, Jack Davis <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > > Wife and I took a Sierra foot hill drive earlier this AM and found > a > > road (Frenchtown) we hadn't taken before. > > Came across this barn framed by a beautiful Oak and set off by a > patch > > of California Gold dry grass. > > Had a 1-hour processing and CD done at Walgreen's. > > Scan only able as web upload. > > > > MZ-S, FA*28~70, 1-stop B+W ND grad(sky), Reala 100, Bogen 3021 > w/Bogen > > Proball > > > > Comments welcomed > > > > Jack > > > > http://photolightimages.com/aspupload/detail.asp?ID=169 -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net
