In a message dated 6/17/2006 7:04:55 PM Pacific Daylight Time, 
[EMAIL PROTECTED] writes:
Hi.

This was composed by me, taken by my friend.
thats me on the bench with my friends kids

http://www.photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=4256144

MZ-6, Sigma 28-105, unrecorded media, handheld.

all comments welcome.

thanks and regards,
Sridhar
(Vellore, India)
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Nice concept, but a tad too dead center for me. Not so much the bench, but 
the bench AND the horizon line. Also what some have said about separating the 
guy's head from the background would have helped. I feel, even if keeping the 
bench dead center, this might have been better taken either closer to the 
ground, or higher up for a slightly different perspective, so not everything 
would 
be symmetrical.

But the lines in the ground are interesting, the concept is good, and your 
first PESO is a lot better than some's have been. (Like mine. ;-))

Welcome. Hope you keep on sharing.

Marnie aka Doe 

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