Michael,
It's too soft and seems to lack a little something to make it "pop".
I'm not one to be very technical about what you can do in PS or whatever but
I'd try a slightly different angle and more DOF.
All that being said, it's not a BAD photograph. Keep posting and lets see
how much better it gets :)
Cory
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From: "Michael Hamilton" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
To: <[email protected]>
Sent: Wednesday, May 03, 2006 12:20 AM
Subject: PESO - My First PESO
This is partly an experiment in B&W post-processing, part "trying to
rescue a low-light shot".
Orig:
http://www.michaelhamilton.ca/images/joc.jpg
B&W:
http://www.michaelhamilton.ca/images/jocb&w.jpg
Technical:
*ist DS, A-50mm/1.7, 1/25s, f/2.0, ISO 400.
I de-saturated, then adjusted the lightness of the spectrum. Added some
noise.
Tips? Honesty? Brutality?
Thanks.
Michael Hamilton
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