> That makes quite a nice picture in itself, but I agree with Shel that the
> original is stronger, and for the reasons that Shel gives. In particular, I
> like the way it encourages the eye to roam around inside the frame and enjoy
> the whole scene, and give a context to the man reading, and the woman with
> the bike. The other bikes propped up are an important clue about the
> character of the place. I also agree with Shel that the title is telling
> people what to think, and what to see as the most important part of the
> photo. I'd be more inclined just to caption it with the place and date, e.g.
> "Capraville, 2005".

I agree with Bob here... I think I'd take it a bit further... It seems
to me that very often the title either makes or breaks the picture,
which is not a good thing. I think, and it seems especially applicable
to Frank, that the picture should work without a title. The title is
really a topping of the cream, but the dish should work without this
last touch up, if you see what I mean.

And Shel, indeed, you may say that picture *did* something to me ;-).

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Boris

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