Some of the crop is good, particularly at the top. But work on giving him some space tonally rather than geometrically... I'll send you a rough.

Godfrey


On Oct 10, 2005, at 11:02 AM, Bruce Dayton wrote:

Based on crop suggestions from Joe Tainter and Bill Robb, I have
submitted a modified version of the original.

Here is the new cropped version:
http://www.daytonphoto.com/PAW/norcalpdml_sf_009-2bwa.htm

Here is the original:
http://www.daytonphoto.com/PAW/norcalpdml_sf_009-2bw.htm

Thoughts?  Does it enhance the picture?  Does it take away too much
context?

--
Bruce



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