http://home.earthlink.net/~scbelinkoff/away.jpg

Here's a Q&D adjustment to the placement of the swimmer.  I'm not
suggesting it's a better photo, but just putting it forth as an example of
how a slight diffeence ~may~ affect the feel and content of a photo. 
Compare the orig and this and let me know what you think ... does the
placement of the swimmer affect what you feel about the image?  If you can
compare the orig and this either side by side, or flip back and forth
between them quickly, the effect may be more obvious and easier to judge.

Shel 


> [Original Message]
> From: Anthony Farr 

> As the critiques of this picture have come in, I've noticed that the
> swimmer, although she is in her natural element, is often seen as the
> surprising intrusion.  OTOH the businessman's presence is seldom
questioned,
> even though his natural element is the office or the city street.  Now
> THAT'S surreal.


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