Hi,

This is one of those "almost" pics for me.  It almost works, but it doesn't
quite come together.  The framing is a bit off.  Since you've chosen to
show the violinist out of context, making the framing a bit tighter by
losing a little of the open space above the musician's head seems, to my
eye, strengthen the composition. 

Additionally, the rim of his glasses cuts right through his eyes, lessening
the impact of his unique expression and giving him an almost cartoon-like
character.  The bow crossing his face as it does also detracts from his
expression.  Further, when photographing musicians and performers you want
to capture the peak moment of an action.  I don't think you've done that
here, and the result is a rather "flat" snapshot rather than a powerful or
at least strong and interesting portrait or character study.  B&W might
improve the shot considerably, IMO.

Looking at this shot I keep wondering what the other dozen or so frames
might be like.

Shel 


> [Original Message]
> From: Jens Bladt 
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