On Fri, Mar 18, 2005 at 02:57:22AM -0800, Shel Belinkoff wrote: > It doesn't come together at all, John. Too many people all facing in > different directions. There's no cohesion here, just a bunch of people > hanging out on the bridge. Where's the story? What's the photo supposed > to be about? > > Color seems to be a distraction here as well. I did a Q&D B&W conversion > using a plug-in I found, and the pic improved substantially to my eyes. > The jumble of people plus the jumble of color is really too much. > > Shel
That's pretty much what I though, but it's definitely not my forte. I like the two people (father & daughter?) at the left of the shot. I'd have liked to get them alone, but you take what you are given.

