I tend to agree with you. The car looks out of place. Without it the scene may have a more timeless, even placeless, quality, which might well enhance the photo (depending, of course, upon what background element(s) the car is concealing).
Shel > [Original Message] > From: Bruce Dayton > > Like the light, like the shot through the doorway, don't like the car. > Without the car, this would be quite nice. > http://homepage.mac.com/ramarren/photo/PAW5/12.htm
