Hi Bruce ....

Well, it's an OK pic, nothing particularly special about it.  For these old
eyes it has a lot of flaws.  While the background is nice and soft, showing
fine bokeh, the background colors seem to "fight" the detail and subtlety
found in the branch.  The brightest parts of the branch, the tips, look
burnt out to me, and the shadows, the underside of the branch, seem too
bright.  I'd like to see this whole print a little darker, maybe brought
down in the editing software or perhaps  with a little less exposure.  If
just the brightest part of the background were brought down, there might be
a strong improvement.

I'm not sure about the crop. On the one hand having the space between the
lowest branch tip and the bottom of the frame works fairly well, I keep
thinking that by cropping the bottom of the frame to just about meet the
branch tip you'd have a stronger graphic.  Take a look at it in a 5x7
format and see what you think.

Shel 

 Bruce Dayton 

> This is one that I suspect people will either really like or see
>  nothing at all.  Taken of an old (living) oak with lichen covered
>  branches.
>
> http://www.daytonphoto.com/PAW/bkd_1091.htm


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