Steve,
I think you have done well for a hand held shot, and I don't find the OOF
parts of the snail that distracting.

Your situation is pretty much like one I had with a shot of a swallowtail
butterfly from Shenandoah. I ended up cropping. Have you considered that for
the snail shot?

I'll see if I can put up the butterfly later tonight.

Jostein


----- Original Message ----- 
From: "Steve Desjardins" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
To: <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
Sent: Friday, June 25, 2004 7:36 PM
Subject: PAW - Snail's pace


> I was walking in the evening a few days ago and it started raining.  I
> noticed a number snails moving out of the grass onto the wet road.
> Taking my *ist D out of the plastic shopping bag (yes I was prepared)
> and getting down on the road I took this with an A50 1.7.
>
> http://home.wlu.edu/~desjardi/
>
> I'm not completely happy with this.  I got most of the snail in focus,
> but the center of the shell is a bit off, as is the end of one "stalk"
> In addition, there are some blown highlights on the shell. The big
> problem though is that I find the out of focus gravel to be
> distracting.  Any ideas?  I tried selecting the blurred positions and
> doing a Gaussian blur to soften them a bit, but the contrast with the
> sharp gravel "path" was too much.  Any suggestions?
>
> I am planning a series of B&W's of snails playing saxophones for money
> in Lexington, but they're not ready yet . . . ;-)
>

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