Hi, Charles, Thanks a lot for the review. The author have published -14, which incorporates your comments below. Feel free to review the diff at : https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-opsawg-ucl-acl-14, and let us know if you have further comments.
Best Regards, Qiufang //co-author -----Original Message----- From: Charles Eckel via Datatracker [mailto:[email protected]] Sent: Wednesday, April 1, 2026 5:19 AM To: The IESG <[email protected]> Cc: [email protected]; [email protected]; [email protected]; [email protected] Subject: Charles Eckel's No Objection on draft-ietf-opsawg-ucl-acl-13: (with COMMENT) Charles Eckel has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-opsawg-ucl-acl-13: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/handling-ballot-positions/ for more information about how to handle DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsawg-ucl-acl/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Thanks for your work in this document. I have some non-blocking COMMENTS that I share in the hope of helping to improve the document. Section 1. Introduction +1 to Deb's comment on clarifying "flushing out the MAC address". I think it would be helpful to separate the last sentence into two, as follows: "The document does not specify how to map the policy group identifiers to dedicated fields. Group-Based Policy (GBP), discussed in Section 6.2.3 of [RFC9638], provides an example of how that may be achieved." Section 3. Usage I found the following sentence hard to parse and suggest a possible alternative. OLD An alternate approach is to configure endpoint groups to classify users, enterprise devices and applications and associate ACLs with endpoint groups so that endpoints in each group can share a group of ACL rules. NEW An alternate approach is to configure endpoint groups to classify users, enterprise devices, and applications, and to associate ACLs with endpoint groups so that endpoints in each group can share a group of ACL rules. _______________________________________________ OPSAWG mailing list -- [email protected] To unsubscribe send an email to [email protected]
