Thanks for your review Mike! Answers inline:
On Wed, Apr 23, 2025 at 6:44 PM Mike Bishop via Datatracker < [email protected]> wrote: > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > COMMENT: > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > Thank you for a solid and well-written document. Definitely a pleasure to > read > such a thorough analysis. > > The document states, "Given the popularity of this scenario, this document > uses > the term "JavaScript" to refer to all mechanisms that allow code to > execute in > the application's runtime in the browser. The recommendations and > considerations in this document are not exclusively linked to the > JavaScript > language or its runtime, but also apply to other languages and runtime > environments in the browser." I understand the temptation because of how we > often speak about browser code, but that seems like a recipe for confusion > -- > how about not doing that? Use JavaScript when you actually mean JavaScript > itself, and use "browser-based apps" when you're more general (which is > most of > the time). > > Please also be consistent in your usage of JavaScript versus JS. We can > afford > the extra characters unless you're referring to the standard file > extension. > I've done a thorough update to the language to be consistent with the terminology here. All references should now say "browser-based application" when referring to the general case, and "JavaScript" only when talking about specific JavaScript APIs. > > Nit: > > - Why is "The first part (Section 5.1)" not simply "Section 5.1"? Same with > second/5.2. > Thanks, fixed. These changes are not yet posted to datatracker but you can see them on the GitHub diffs: * https://github.com/oauth-wg/oauth-browser-based-apps/commit/f33b5f02b67de0aea697f4a45a5970e7df7d4b8f * https://github.com/oauth-wg/oauth-browser-based-apps/commit/7d72df77b94b62a6a8141ffb4e6ae32fb6745dfd The preview build of the doc is here: https://drafts.oauth.net/oauth-browser-based-apps/draft-ietf-oauth-browser-based-apps.html Thanks! Aaron
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