Hi Jürgen, Thank you for your reply. Your proposed changes look good to me.
Regards, Giuseppe -----Original Message----- From: Jürgen Schönwälder <[email protected]> Sent: Monday, October 21, 2024 12:20 PM To: Giuseppe Fioccola <[email protected]> Cc: [email protected]; [email protected]; [email protected]; [email protected] Subject: Re: Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6991-bis-16 Thanks for the review. I like the proposal to merge the text currently found in the appendix into the introduction (and to also point out that Section 2 provides an overview of all types). I am less sure a detailed discussion why specific types were added is useful. At the end it is the NETMOD working group managing this document. Perhaps I should add a statement like "Additional type definitions may be added in the future by submitting proposals to the NETMOD working group." to clarify that there is a process to propose new types. And this may also serve as a hint that detailed discussions can be found in the working group archives. /js On Tue, Sep 10, 2024 at 08:14:11AM -0700, Giuseppe Fioccola via Datatracker wrote: > Reviewer: Giuseppe Fioccola > Review result: Has Nits > > This document is clear for its scope. It simply adds new type > definitions to the "ietf-yang-types" and "ietf-inet-types" YANG modules and > obsoletes RFC 6991. > > The new types defined in the YANG modules are quite understandable, > but I would suggest to add some explanation, maybe in section 2, about > the motivations behind the addition of these new types (for example, > the new date/time related types compared to the date-and-time type already > defined in RFC 6021). > > I noticed that there are two appendixes about the changes from RFC > 6991 and from RFC 6021, which only refer to section 3 and section 4. I > think it is useful to add a reference also to section 2, since the > tables there show the new types with respect to RFC 6991 and RFC 6021. > Additionally, you can consider to move these appendixes as subsections of > section 1. > > > -- Jürgen Schönwälder Constructor University Bremen gGmbH Phone: +49 421 200 3587 Campus Ring 1 | 28759 Bremen | Germany _______________________________________________ netmod mailing list -- [email protected] To unsubscribe send an email to [email protected]
