Jumping in as a co-editor…

That is correct. Would it help if the word collector was used? Something like

OLD:
It is intended this model be used by vendors who implement syslog in their 
systems.

NEW:
It is intended this model be used by vendors who implement syslog collector in 
their systems.

[JMC] Maybe, “It is intended that this model be used by vendors who implement 
syslog collectors in their systems.”

Joe

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