On Tue, 12 Dec 2017 17:07:23 -0800
William Tu <u9012...@gmail.com> wrote:

> +.RB external
> +- make this tunnel externally controlled (or not, which is the default).
> +This is also known as collect_metadata mode for tunnels.

Much better.
The man page still needs some work.

The phrase "is also known as" is a little confusing and putting a specific
variable name in man page is misleading. Maybe better wording would
be:

In the kernel, this is referred to as collect metadata mode.

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