Document: draft-ietf-lisp-geo Title: LISP Geo-Coordinates Reviewer: Yingzhen Qu Review result: Has Nits
Hello, I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft. The Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related drafts as they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and sometimes on special request. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to the Routing ADs. For more information about the Routing Directorate, please see http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it would be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF Last Call comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through discussion or by updating the draft. Document: draft-ietf-lisp-geo-11 Reviewer: Yingzhen Qu Review Date: 30 April 2025 IETF LC End Date: 2025-05-07 Intended Status: Experimental Summary: I have some minor concerns for the author to consider before publication. Comments: Overall this draft is clear and well-written. Major Issues: No major issues found. Minor Issues: A WiFi access-point RLOC can be selected to encapsulate packets to because it will have better signal to the current EID location. This sentence doesn't parse well. I think there is an extra "to". So an ITR could encapsulate to multiple RLOCs in the Geo-Prefix to try to create connectivity to the vehicle while roaming. Please expand "ITR". The new Geo-Location format is: Please consider change this to "The Geo-Coordinates LCAF format is:", or simply remove the "new". R-bit: If the R-bit is set, it indicates the "Radius" field is used and the encoding is a Geo-Prefix. If the R-bit is clear, it indicates the "Radius" field is set to 0 and and the encoding is a Geo-Point. Question: Is this R-bit necessary? When the "Radius" is set to non-zero, it means the encoding is Geo-Prefix, and when the "Radius" is set to 0, the encoding is a Geo-Point. Thanks, Yingzhen _______________________________________________ lisp mailing list -- [email protected] To unsubscribe send an email to [email protected]
