Hi Dino,
Thank you for this easy-to-read document. Very few comments:
idnits 2.17.1
draft-ietf-lisp-geo-10.txt:
General comments from nits:
** The abstract seems to contain references ([RFC8060]), which it
shouldn't. Please replace those with straight textual mentions of the
documents in question.
== The document seems to lack the recommended RFC 2119 boilerplate, even if
it appears to use RFC 2119 keywords -- however, there's a paragraph with
a matching beginning. Boilerplate error?
== Missing Reference: 'Section 7' is mentioned on line 404, but not defined
** Obsolete normative reference: RFC 1700 (Obsoleted by RFC 3232)
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19 This document updates [RFC8060].
Jim> s/[RFC8060]/RFC8060
107 Identifier (AFI) [RFC1700].
Jim> RFC1700 obsoleted by RFC3232. Please update reference.
122 records. See [RFC9301] for what LISP messages contain EID-records
Jim> s/what/which
133 3. Definition of Terms
135 Geo-Point is a Geo-Coordinate according to [GEO] that defines a
136 point from parameters Latitude, Longitude, and Altitude.
138 Geo-Prefix forms a circle of a geographic area made up of a Geo-
139 Point and a Radius. A Geo-Point is known to be "more-specific"
140 than a Geo-Prefix when its physical location is within the
141 geographic circle.
Jim> Update both the above to remove whitespace. For example /Geo-Point
/Geo-point:
Jim
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