Thanks Acee for your useful comments. I created 
draft-ietf-lisp-name-encoding-09 and it is on the queue for when submission 
window opens up.

> On Jul 9, 2024, at 12:32 PM, Acee Lindem <[email protected]> wrote:
> 
> Major Issues: None
> 
> Minor Issues:
> 
> I have the following minor comments.
> 
>  1. In section 3, could you more precisely define the places where
>     the new encoding is used? I guess in any LISP message where an
>     EID or RLOC is specified?

It is listed in section 3 where we say all messages that contain EID-records 
and RLOC-records can use the name-encoding AFI.

>  2. In section 5, the final sentence fragment didn't parse and it
>     wasn't obvious to me how to edit it - "As well as identifying
>     the router name...".

Fixed. Thanks.

>  3. In section 9.2, The description of the onboarding process includes
>     very specific details that aren't fully explained. Would it be
>     possible to describe the use case at a higher level?

This is some text from the cisco guys. I don't know how to change that. They 
have the intellectual property on it.

>  4. Remove change log prior to publication.

Ack.

> Nits:
> 
>   I've attached some editorial suggestions.

Applied all your suggestions, modulo RTRs are "Re-encapsualting Tunnel Routers" 
but they are reliable too LOL.

Dino

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