source/text/shared/00/00000020.xhp               |    2 -
 source/text/shared/01/01020001.xhp               |    2 -
 source/text/shared/01/01060001.xhp               |    2 -
 source/text/shared/01/05020200.xhp               |    2 -
 source/text/shared/guide/cmis-remote-files.xhp   |   24 +++++++++++------------
 source/text/shared/guide/ms_user.xhp             |    4 +--
 source/text/shared/optionen/01041000.xhp         |   10 ++++-----
 source/text/simpress/guide/presenter_console.xhp |    2 -
 8 files changed, 24 insertions(+), 24 deletions(-)

New commits:
commit 237f881e17efb3091d93430fa287eab9b9d6b915
Author: Adolfo Jayme Barrientos <[email protected]>
Date:   Sat Jan 20 02:47:59 2018 -0600

    Some copyediting
    
    • Fixing usage of phrasal verbs “check in” and “check out”
    • Adding some missing prepositions
    • Removing some pointless abbreviations
    • Avoiding a reference to a “timer” that’s more precisely a stopwatch
      but not quite…
    
    Change-Id: I37828f85065f17a16365caa45fd5913b771c4bec

diff --git a/source/text/shared/00/00000020.xhp 
b/source/text/shared/00/00000020.xhp
index db92e06db..1a57d7038 100644
--- a/source/text/shared/00/00000020.xhp
+++ b/source/text/shared/00/00000020.xhp
@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@
 <paragraph role="paragraph" id="par_id3145669" xml-lang="en-US"><switchinline 
select="appl"><caseinline select="CALC">
 </caseinline><caseinline select="DRAW">
 </caseinline><caseinline select="IMPRESS">
-</caseinline><defaultinline>$[officename] Writer can read various versions of 
the Microsoft Word text format. You also can save your own texts in Word 
format. However, not everything available with $[officename] Writer can be 
transferred to MS Word, and not everything can be 
imported.</defaultinline></switchinline></paragraph>
+</caseinline><defaultinline>$[officename] Writer can read various versions of 
the Microsoft Word text format. You also can save your own texts in Word 
format. However, not everything available with $[officename] Writer can be 
transferred to Word, and not everything can be 
imported.</defaultinline></switchinline></paragraph>
 <paragraph role="paragraph" id="par_id3150144" xml-lang="en-US"><switchinline 
select="appl"><caseinline select="CALC">
 </caseinline><caseinline select="DRAW">
 </caseinline><caseinline select="IMPRESS">
diff --git a/source/text/shared/01/01020001.xhp 
b/source/text/shared/01/01020001.xhp
index 22e1e4bee..73d3dc4c7 100644
--- a/source/text/shared/01/01020001.xhp
+++ b/source/text/shared/01/01020001.xhp
@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@
         <paragraph role="paragraph" id="par_id431513629862558" 
xml-lang="en-US">Long click on the <emph>Open</emph> icon and select <emph>Open 
Remote Files...</emph></paragraph>
         <embed href="text/shared/00/00000401.xhp#syoeffnen"/>
     </section>
-    <paragraph role="paragraph" id="par_id531513630220632" xml-lang="en-US">A 
remote file server is web service that stores documents with or without 
check-in, check-out, version controls and backups.</paragraph>
+    <paragraph role="paragraph" id="par_id531513630220632" xml-lang="en-US">A 
remote file server is web service that stores documents with or without 
checkin, checkout, version controls and backups.</paragraph>
     <section id="relatedtopics">
         <paragraph role="paragraph" id="par_id951513629981585" 
xml-lang="en-US"><link href="text/shared/guide/cmis-remote-files.xhp" 
name="CMIS">Opening and saving files in remote servers</link></paragraph>
     </section>
diff --git a/source/text/shared/01/01060001.xhp 
b/source/text/shared/01/01060001.xhp
index 40d9f2b03..3f9527031 100644
--- a/source/text/shared/01/01060001.xhp
+++ b/source/text/shared/01/01060001.xhp
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
         <paragraph role="paragraph" id="par_id431513629862558" 
xml-lang="en-US">Long click on the <emph>Save</emph> icon and select <emph>Save 
Remote Files...</emph></paragraph>
         <embed href="text/shared/00/00000401.xhp#sysave"/>
     </section>
-    <paragraph role="paragraph" id="par_id531513630220632" xml-lang="en-US">A 
remote file server is a web service that stores documents with or without 
check-in, check-out, version controls and backups.</paragraph>
+    <paragraph role="paragraph" id="par_id531513630220632" xml-lang="en-US">A 
remote file server is a web service that stores documents with or without 
checkin, checkout, version controls and backups.</paragraph>
     <section id="relatedtopics">
         <paragraph role="paragraph" id="par_id951513629981585" 
xml-lang="en-US"><link href="text/shared/guide/cmis-remote-files.xhp" 
name="CMIS">Opening and saving files in remote servers</link></paragraph>
     </section>
diff --git a/source/text/shared/01/05020200.xhp 
b/source/text/shared/01/05020200.xhp
index 2165973c9..f49ec9ee3 100644
--- a/source/text/shared/01/05020200.xhp
+++ b/source/text/shared/01/05020200.xhp
@@ -144,7 +144,7 @@
 <bookmark xml-lang="en-US" branch="hid/cui/ui/effectspage/strikeoutlb" 
id="bm_id0123200902074215" localize="false"/>
 <paragraph xml-lang="en-US" id="hd_id3150400" role="heading" 
level="2">Strikethrough</paragraph>
       <paragraph xml-lang="en-US" id="par_id3145203" role="paragraph"><ahelp 
hid="cui/ui/effectspage/strikeoutlb">Select a strikethrough style for the 
selected text.</ahelp></paragraph>
-      <paragraph xml-lang="en-US" id="par_id3150496" role="note">If you save 
your document in MS Word format, all of the strikethrough styles are converted 
to the single line style.</paragraph>
+      <paragraph xml-lang="en-US" id="par_id3150496" role="note">If you save 
your document in Microsoft Word format, all of the strikethrough styles are 
converted to the single line style.</paragraph>
 <bookmark xml-lang="en-US" branch="hid/cui/ui/effectspage/underlinelb" 
id="bm_id0123200902053711" localize="false"/>
 <paragraph xml-lang="en-US" id="hd_id3151226" role="heading" 
level="2">Underlining</paragraph>
       <paragraph xml-lang="en-US" id="par_id3147576" role="paragraph"><ahelp 
hid="cui/ui/effectspage/underlinelb">Select the underlining style that you want 
to apply. To apply the underlining to words only, select the <emph>Individual 
Words</emph> box.</ahelp></paragraph>
diff --git a/source/text/shared/guide/cmis-remote-files.xhp 
b/source/text/shared/guide/cmis-remote-files.xhp
index 856cac206..a9f62da3c 100644
--- a/source/text/shared/guide/cmis-remote-files.xhp
+++ b/source/text/shared/guide/cmis-remote-files.xhp
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@
 <bookmark xml-lang="en-US" 
branch="hid/fps/ui/remotefilesdialog/RemoteFilesDialog" id="bm_id3148069" 
localize="false"/>
 <paragraph id="hd_id150820161615009403" role="heading" level="1" 
xml-lang="en-US"><variable id="remote-files"><link 
href="text/shared/guide/cmis-remote-files.xhp">Opening and saving files on 
remote servers</link></variable></paragraph>
 <paragraph id="par_id15082016161546265" role="paragraph" 
xml-lang="en-US"><ahelp hid="fps/ui/remotefilesdialog/RemoteFilesDialog">Remote 
Files Service User Guide</ahelp></paragraph>
-<paragraph id="par_id150820161816031425" role="paragraph" 
xml-lang="en-US">%PRODUCTNAME can open and save files stored on remote servers. 
Keeping files on remote servers allows to work with the documents using 
different computers. For example, you can work on a document in the office 
during the day and edit it at home for last-minute changes. Storing files on a 
remote server also backs up documents from computer loss or hard disk failure. 
Some servers are also able to check-in and check-out files, thus controlling 
their usage and access.</paragraph>
+<paragraph id="par_id150820161816031425" role="paragraph" 
xml-lang="en-US">%PRODUCTNAME can open and save files stored on remote servers. 
Keeping files on remote servers allows to work with the documents using 
different computers. For example, you can work on a document in the office 
during the day and edit it at home for last-minute changes. Storing files on a 
remote server also protects them from computer loss or hard disk failure. Some 
servers are also able to check in and check out files, thus controlling their 
usage and access.</paragraph>
 <paragraph id="par_id150820161816033566" role="paragraph" 
xml-lang="en-US">%PRODUCTNAME supports many document servers that use well 
known network protocols such as FTP, WebDAV, Windows share, and SSH. It also 
supports popular services like Google Drive as well as commercial and open 
source servers that implement the OASIS CMIS standard.</paragraph>
 <paragraph id="par_id170820161605418200" role="paragraph" xml-lang="en-US">To 
work with a remote file service you must first <link 
href="text/shared/guide/cmis-remote-files-setup.xhp">setup a remote file 
connection</link>.</paragraph>
 </section>
@@ -66,20 +66,20 @@
   <bookmark_value>remote file service;file lock</bookmark_value>
   <bookmark_value>remote file service;version control</bookmark_value>
   <bookmark_value>remote file service;working copy</bookmark_value>
-  <bookmark_value>remote file service;check-out</bookmark_value>
-  <bookmark_value>remote file service;check-in</bookmark_value>
+  <bookmark_value>remote file service;checkout</bookmark_value>
+  <bookmark_value>remote file service;checkin</bookmark_value>
 </bookmark>
 
 
 <paragraph id="hd_id170820161605421283" role="heading" level="2" 
xml-lang="en-US">Checking out and checking in files</paragraph>
-<paragraph id="par_id170820161605429941" role="paragraph" 
xml-lang="en-US">Check Out and Check In services control updates to document 
and prevent unwanted overwrites in a CMIS remote service.</paragraph>
-<paragraph id="par_id17082016160542203" role="paragraph" 
xml-lang="en-US">Checking out a document locks it, preventing other users 
writing changes to it. Only one user can have a particular document checked out 
(locked) at any time. Checking in a document or canceling the check out unlocks 
the document.</paragraph>
-<paragraph id="par_id170820161605426690" role="note" xml-lang="en-US">There 
are no check controls for remote files in Windows Shares, WebDAV, FTP and SSH 
services.</paragraph>
-<paragraph id="par_id170820161605428976" role="paragraph" 
xml-lang="en-US">When a file is open from a CMIS remote file service, 
%PRODUCTNAME display a <emph>Check-out</emph> button on the top message area. 
Click the <emph>Check-out</emph> button to lock the file in the server to 
prevent edition by another user. Alternatively choose <item 
type="menuitem">File - Check-out</item>.</paragraph>
-<paragraph id="par_id190820161707153804" role="paragraph" 
xml-lang="en-US">%PRODUCTNAME creates a working copy of the file in the server 
(and inserts the string <item type="literal">(Working Copy)</item> in the file 
name) when a file is checked-out. Every edition and save operation is done in 
the working copy. You can save your file as many times you want. When you 
finished your changes, check-in the file.</paragraph>
-<paragraph id="par_id190820161707156843" role="paragraph" xml-lang="en-US">To 
check-in the file, choose <item type="menuitem">File - Check-in</item>. A 
dialog opens to insert comments about the last edition. These comments are 
recorded in the CMIS server for version control. The working copy replaces the 
existing file and its version number is updated.</paragraph>
-<paragraph id="par_id190820161707155303" role="paragraph" xml-lang="en-US">To 
cancel a check-out, choose <item type="menuitem">File - Cancel 
Check-Out</item>. A warning message will inform that the latest edition will be 
discarded. If confirmed, no version updates occurs.</paragraph>
-<paragraph id="par_id19082016170715785" role="warning" 
xml-lang="en-US">Remember to check-in the file when finishing using it. Not 
doing so will lock the file and no other user will be allowed to modify 
it.</paragraph>
+<paragraph id="par_id170820161605429941" role="paragraph" xml-lang="en-US">The 
Check Out and Check In actions control updates to the document and prevent 
unwanted overwrites in a CMIS remote service.</paragraph>
+<paragraph id="par_id17082016160542203" role="paragraph" 
xml-lang="en-US">Checking out a document locks it, preventing other users from 
writing changes to it. Only one user can have a particular document checked out 
(locked) at any time. Checking in a document or canceling the checkout unlocks 
the document.</paragraph>
+<paragraph id="par_id170820161605426690" role="note" xml-lang="en-US">There 
are no checkin/checkout controls for remote files in Windows Shares, WebDAV, 
FTP and SSH services.</paragraph>
+<paragraph id="par_id170820161605428976" role="paragraph" 
xml-lang="en-US">When a file is open from a CMIS remote file service, 
%PRODUCTNAME displays a <emph>Check Out</emph> button on the top message area. 
Click the <emph>Check Out</emph> button to lock the file in the server to 
prevent edition by another user. Alternatively choose <item 
type="menuitem">File - Check Out</item>.</paragraph>
+<paragraph id="par_id190820161707153804" role="paragraph" 
xml-lang="en-US">%PRODUCTNAME creates a working copy of the file in the server 
(and inserts the string <item type="literal">(Working Copy)</item> in the file 
name) when a file is checked out. Every edition and save operation is done in 
the working copy. You can save your file as many times you want. When you 
finished your changes, check in the file.</paragraph>
+<paragraph id="par_id190820161707156843" role="paragraph" xml-lang="en-US">To 
check in the file, choose <item type="menuitem">File - Check In</item>. A 
dialog opens to insert comments about the last edition. These comments are 
recorded in the CMIS server for version control. The working copy replaces the 
existing file and its version number is updated.</paragraph>
+<paragraph id="par_id190820161707155303" role="paragraph" xml-lang="en-US">To 
cancel a checkout, choose <item type="menuitem">File - Cancel Checkout</item>. 
A warning message will inform that the latest edition will be discarded. If 
confirmed, no version updates occurs.</paragraph>
+<paragraph id="par_id19082016170715785" role="warning" 
xml-lang="en-US">Remember to check in the file when finishing using it. Not 
doing so will lock the file and no other user will be allowed to modify 
it.</paragraph>
 </section>
 <bookmark xml-lang="en-US" branch="index" id="bm_id190820161722159908">
   <bookmark_value>remote file service;saving to remote server</bookmark_value>
@@ -114,7 +114,7 @@
     <paragraph id="par_id170820161605424622" role="ol_item" 
xml-lang="en-US">Enter a name in the File name box and click 
<emph>Save</emph>.</paragraph>
   </listitem>
   <listitem>
-    <paragraph id="par_id190820161707163121" role="ol_item" 
xml-lang="en-US">If you will end working with the file, check-in the file, Go 
to <item type="menuitem">File - Check-in</item>.</paragraph>
+    <paragraph id="par_id190820161707163121" role="ol_item" 
xml-lang="en-US">If you will end up working with the file, check it in. To do 
so, choose <item type="menuitem">File - Check In</item>.</paragraph>
   </listitem>
 </list>
 <bookmark xml-lang="en-US" branch="index" id="bm_id19082016172305788">
diff --git a/source/text/shared/guide/ms_user.xhp 
b/source/text/shared/guide/ms_user.xhp
index 4d661f4ae..dc9cffe50 100644
--- a/source/text/shared/guide/ms_user.xhp
+++ b/source/text/shared/guide/ms_user.xhp
@@ -53,7 +53,7 @@
 </tablerow>
 <tablerow>
 <tablecell>
-<paragraph role="tablecontent" id="par_id3153543" xml-lang="en-US">MS Word, 
*.doc, *.docx</paragraph>
+<paragraph role="tablecontent" id="par_id3153543" xml-lang="en-US">Microsoft 
Word, *.doc, *.docx</paragraph>
 </tablecell>
 <tablecell>
 <paragraph role="tablecontent" id="par_id3147620" 
xml-lang="en-US">$[officename] Writer</paragraph>
@@ -69,7 +69,7 @@
 </tablerow>
 <tablerow>
 <tablecell>
-<paragraph role="tablecontent" id="par_id3147574" xml-lang="en-US">MS 
PowerPoint, *.ppt, *.pps, *.pptx</paragraph>
+<paragraph role="tablecontent" id="par_id3147574" xml-lang="en-US">Microsoft 
PowerPoint, *.ppt, *.pps, *.pptx</paragraph>
 </tablecell>
 <tablecell>
 <paragraph role="tablecontent" id="par_id3153626" 
xml-lang="en-US">$[officename] Impress</paragraph>
diff --git a/source/text/shared/optionen/01041000.xhp 
b/source/text/shared/optionen/01041000.xhp
index 644f82ef4..b34f397aa 100644
--- a/source/text/shared/optionen/01041000.xhp
+++ b/source/text/shared/optionen/01041000.xhp
@@ -54,11 +54,11 @@
 <paragraph role="note" id="par_id3155768" xml-lang="en-US">If you set this 
option for the current document and then save the document, for example, in an 
older binary format, this option will not be saved. If you later open the file 
from the older format, this option will be set by default.</paragraph>
 </section>
 <paragraph role="heading" id="hd_id3145640" xml-lang="en-US" level="3">Add 
spacing between paragraphs and tables</paragraph>
-<paragraph role="paragraph" id="par_id3147339" xml-lang="en-US">In 
$[officename] Writer, paragraph spacing is defined differently than in MS Word 
documents. If you have defined spacing between two paragraphs or tables, 
spacing is also added in the corresponding MS Word documents.</paragraph>
-<paragraph role="paragraph" id="par_id3151250" xml-lang="en-US">Specifies 
whether to add MS Word-compatible spacing between paragraphs and tables in 
$[officename] Writer text documents.</paragraph>
+<paragraph role="paragraph" id="par_id3147339" xml-lang="en-US">In 
$[officename] Writer, paragraph spacing is defined differently than in 
Microsoft Word documents. If you have defined spacing between two paragraphs or 
tables, spacing is also added in the corresponding Word documents.</paragraph>
+<paragraph role="paragraph" id="par_id3151250" xml-lang="en-US">Specifies 
whether to add Microsoft Word-compatible spacing between paragraphs and tables 
in $[officename] Writer text documents.</paragraph>
 <paragraph role="heading" id="hd_id3146317" xml-lang="en-US" level="3">Add 
paragraph and table spacing at tops of pages</paragraph>
 <paragraph role="paragraph" id="par_id3155333" xml-lang="en-US">Specifies 
whether paragraph spacing at the top of a page will also be effective at the 
beginning of a page or column if the paragraph is positioned on the first page 
of the document. The same applies for a page break.</paragraph>
-<paragraph role="note" id="par_id3145789" xml-lang="en-US">If you import an MS 
Word document, the spaces are automatically added during the 
conversion.</paragraph>
+<paragraph role="note" id="par_id3145789" xml-lang="en-US">If you import a 
Word document, the spaces are automatically added during the 
conversion.</paragraph>
 <paragraph role="heading" id="hd_id3149964" xml-lang="en-US" level="3">Use 
OpenOffice.org 1.1 tab stop formatting<comment>UFI: spec "Tab Stop 
Compatibility"</comment></paragraph>
 <paragraph role="paragraph" id="par_id3152777" xml-lang="en-US">Specifies how 
to align text at tab stops beyond the right margin, how to handle decimal tab 
stops, and how to handle tab stops close to a line break. If this check box is 
not selected, tab stops are handled in the same way as in other Office 
applications.</paragraph>
 <paragraph role="paragraph" id="par_idN10810" xml-lang="en-US">In text 
documents created by your current version of Writer, the new tab stop handling 
is used by default. In text documents created by Writer versions prior to 
StarOffice 8 or OpenOffice.org 2.0, the old tab stop handling is 
applied.</paragraph>
@@ -76,8 +76,8 @@
 <paragraph role="paragraph" id="par_idN10867" xml-lang="en-US">If the option 
is on, the floating objects are positioned as in Writer versions prior to 
StarOffice 8 or OpenOffice.org 2.0. If the option is off, the floating objects 
are positioned using an alternative method that is similar to the method used 
by Microsoft Word. </paragraph>
 <paragraph role="paragraph" id="par_idN1086A" xml-lang="en-US">The option will 
be set to off for new documents. For Writer documents created by a version 
prior to OpenOffice.org 2.0 the option is on.</paragraph>
 <paragraph role="heading" id="par_idN10821" xml-lang="en-US" level="3">Use 
OpenOffice.org 1.1 text wrapping around objects<comment>UFI: spec doc 
adjust-text-wrapping.sxw</comment></paragraph>
-<paragraph role="paragraph" id="par_id4016541" xml-lang="en-US">MS Word and 
Writer have different approaches on wrapping text around floating screen 
objects. Floating screen object are Writer frames and drawing objects, and the 
objects 'text box', 'graphic', 'frame', 'picture' etc. in MS Word.</paragraph>
-<paragraph role="paragraph" id="par_id7280190" xml-lang="en-US">In MS Word and 
in current versions of Writer, page header/footer content and footnote/endnote 
content does not wrap around floating screen objects. Text body content wraps 
around floating screen objects which are anchored in the page header. 
</paragraph>
+<paragraph role="paragraph" id="par_id4016541" xml-lang="en-US">Microsoft Word 
and Writer have different approaches on wrapping text around floating screen 
objects. Floating screen object are Writer frames and drawing objects, and the 
objects 'text box', 'graphic', 'frame', 'picture' etc. in Microsoft 
Word.</paragraph>
+<paragraph role="paragraph" id="par_id7280190" xml-lang="en-US">In Microsoft 
Word and in current versions of Writer, page header/footer content and 
footnote/endnote content does not wrap around floating screen objects. Text 
body content wraps around floating screen objects which are anchored in the 
page header. </paragraph>
 <paragraph role="paragraph" id="par_id2782982" xml-lang="en-US">In Writer 
versions prior to StarOffice 8 or OpenOffice.org 2.0, the opposite was 
true.</paragraph>
 <paragraph role="paragraph" id="par_idN10892" xml-lang="en-US">If the option 
is off, which is the default setting, the new text wrapping will be applied. If 
the option is on, the former text wrapping will be applied. </paragraph>
 <paragraph role="heading" id="par_idN1092A" xml-lang="en-US" 
level="3">Consider wrapping style when positioning objects<comment>UFI: spec 
obj-pos-without-wrapping</comment></paragraph>
diff --git a/source/text/simpress/guide/presenter_console.xhp 
b/source/text/simpress/guide/presenter_console.xhp
index d4c50bdc9..5fa67c3f2 100644
--- a/source/text/simpress/guide/presenter_console.xhp
+++ b/source/text/simpress/guide/presenter_console.xhp
@@ -75,7 +75,7 @@
             <paragraph id="par_id101512828220096"  role="listitem" 
xml-lang="en-US"><emph>Slide</emph>: display the Presenter Console Slide sorter 
mode</paragraph>
         </listitem>
         <listitem>
-            <paragraph id="par_id241512828268769"  role="listitem" 
xml-lang="en-US"><emph>Restart</emph>: restart the slide show timer.</paragraph>
+            <paragraph id="par_id241512828268769"  role="listitem" 
xml-lang="en-US"><emph>Restart</emph>: restart the slide show’s elapsed 
time.</paragraph>
         </listitem>
         <listitem>
             <paragraph id="par_id731512828322875"  role="listitem" 
xml-lang="en-US"><emph>Exchange</emph>: Switch the displays between the 
computer and the presentation display.</paragraph>
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