source/text/shared/optionen/persona_firefox.xhp |   18 +++++++++---------
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commit 15b865721769943ba89a38d98f951fecd14d020d
Author: Adolfo Jayme Barrientos <[email protected]>
Date:   Wed Jan 13 10:47:51 2016 -0600

    Copyedit the documentation on Firefox Themes
    
    It was so badly written I had trouble understanding it.
    
    Change-Id: I4b1172a2fc2e0a8028241188d15d0ea4388f1f25

diff --git a/source/text/shared/optionen/persona_firefox.xhp 
b/source/text/shared/optionen/persona_firefox.xhp
index ee3094e..8934ba2 100644
--- a/source/text/shared/optionen/persona_firefox.xhp
+++ b/source/text/shared/optionen/persona_firefox.xhp
@@ -41,10 +41,10 @@
 
 
 <paragraph id="par_idN10558" role="heading" xml-lang="en-US" level="1"><link 
href="text/shared/optionen/persona_firefox.xhp">Personalization</link></paragraph>
-<paragraph id="par_idN10568" role="paragraph" xml-lang="en-US">You can 
personalize your %PRODUCTNAME with the same themes available for Mozilla 
Firefox. The menu bar, upper toolbars and the bottom toolbars will display the 
chosen theme in their background.</paragraph>
+<paragraph id="par_idN10568" role="paragraph" xml-lang="en-US">You can 
customize %PRODUCTNAME with the same themes available for Mozilla Firefox. The 
menu bar and the toolbars docked in the top and bottom of the window will 
display the chosen theme in the background.</paragraph>
 </section>
 <paragraph id="par_id1309201511361016" role="tip" xml-lang="en-US">Mozilla 
Firefox themes are available at the Mozilla website at the following address: 
<link 
href="https://addons.mozilla.org/en-US/firefox/themes/";>https://addons.mozilla.org/en-US/firefox/themes/</link>.</paragraph>
-<paragraph id="par_id1309201511361064" role="tip" xml-lang="en-US">Any Mozilla 
Firefox compliant theme will work with %PRODUCTNAME. However, not every theme 
will give good visual results. The bars background theme can interfere in menus 
and icons readability.</paragraph>
+<paragraph id="par_id1309201511361064" role="tip" xml-lang="en-US">Any 
Firefox-compliant theme will work with %PRODUCTNAME. However, not every theme 
will give good visual results—if the image is too busy, it could interfere 
with the readability of the icons and the menus.</paragraph>
 
 <section id="howtoget"><embed 
href="text/shared/00/00000406.xhp#personalization"/>
 </section>
@@ -53,26 +53,26 @@
 <paragraph id="par_id1309201511361076" role="paragraph" xml-lang="en-US">The 
following options are available:</paragraph>
 
 <paragraph id="hd_id1309201511361042" role="heading" xml-lang="en-US" 
level="3">Default look, do not use themes</paragraph>
-<paragraph id="par_id130920151136107" role="paragraph" xml-lang="en-US"><ahelp 
hid="cui/ui/personalization_tab/no_persona">The toolbars background inherit the 
background settings of the window manager of your desktop.</ahelp> This is the 
default for %PRODUCTNAME. </paragraph>
+<paragraph id="par_id130920151136107" role="paragraph" xml-lang="en-US"><ahelp 
hid="cui/ui/personalization_tab/no_persona">The toolbars’ background inherits 
the background settings of your desktop environment.</ahelp> This is the 
default setting in %PRODUCTNAME.</paragraph>
 
 <paragraph id="hd_id1309201511361088" role="heading" xml-lang="en-US" 
level="3">Pre-installed theme (if available)</paragraph>
-<paragraph id="par_id1309201511361194" role="paragraph" 
xml-lang="en-US"><ahelp 
hid="cui/ui/personalization_tab/default_persona">Display the system theme, if 
available.</ahelp>Your system administrator may have added a global (system 
wide) theme during the %PRODUCTNAME installation. This option will display 
it.</paragraph>
+<paragraph id="par_id1309201511361194" role="paragraph" 
xml-lang="en-US"><ahelp 
hid="cui/ui/personalization_tab/default_persona">Display the system theme, if 
available.</ahelp>Your system administrator may have added a global 
(system-wide) theme during the %PRODUCTNAME installation. This option will 
display it.</paragraph>
 
 <paragraph id="hd_id1309201511361072" role="heading" xml-lang="en-US" 
level="3">Own theme</paragraph>
-<paragraph id="par_id1309201511361168" role="paragraph" 
xml-lang="en-US"><ahelp hid="cui/ui/personalization_tab/own_persona">Choose 
this option to open the Select Firefox Theme dialog for more choices of 
themes.</ahelp></paragraph>
+<paragraph id="par_id1309201511361168" role="paragraph" 
xml-lang="en-US"><ahelp hid="cui/ui/personalization_tab/own_persona">Choose 
this option to open the “Select Firefox Theme” dialog and pick your 
own.</ahelp></paragraph>
 
 <bookmark xml-lang="en-US" 
branch="hid/cui/ui/select_persona_dialog/SelectPersonaDialog" id="bm_id6892839" 
localize="false"/>
 <paragraph id="hd_id1309201511361021" role="heading" xml-lang="en-US" 
level="2">Select Firefox Theme dialog</paragraph>
 <paragraph id="par_id1309201511361056" role="paragraph" xml-lang="en-US">This 
dialog allows you to install a specific theme or gives you a glimpse on other 
exciting themes from the Mozilla Firefox themes website.</paragraph>
 
 <paragraph id="hd_id1309201511361084" role="heading" xml-lang="en-US" 
level="3">Custom Search</paragraph>
-<paragraph id="par_id1309201511361068" role="paragraph" 
xml-lang="en-US"><ahelp hid="cui/ui/select_persona_dialog/search_term">Type or 
paste the URL of the theme page of the Mozilla Firefox themes website.</ahelp> 
To get the URL, navigate with your computer browser to the theme web page and 
copy the URL displayed in the navigation bar of your browser. Then paste it in 
the text area of the dialog. Click in the <item type="menuitem">Search</item> 
button to download and install it in %PRODUCTNAME.</paragraph>
+<paragraph id="par_id1309201511361068" role="paragraph" 
xml-lang="en-US"><ahelp hid="cui/ui/select_persona_dialog/search_term">Type or 
paste the URL of the theme’s webpage.</ahelp> To get the URL, navigate with 
your browser to the theme’s webpage and copy the URL displayed in the 
navigation bar of your browser. Then paste it in the dialog’s text box. Click 
the <item type="menuitem">Search</item> button to download and install it in 
%PRODUCTNAME.</paragraph>
 
-<paragraph id="hd_id1309201511361099" role="heading" xml-lang="en-US" 
level="3">Suggested Themes By Category</paragraph>
+<paragraph id="hd_id1309201511361099" role="heading" xml-lang="en-US" 
level="3">Suggested Themes by Category</paragraph>
 <paragraph id="par_id1309201511361087" role="paragraph" 
xml-lang="en-US"><ahelp hid="cui/ui/select_persona_dialog/frame4">Shows a 
random choice of nine themes based on the categories displayed in the 
buttons.</ahelp></paragraph>
-<paragraph id="par_id130920151136105" role="paragraph" xml-lang="en-US">Click 
in one of the 5 buttons to display in the image area below a random choice of 
nine themes tagged by the button category.</paragraph>
+<paragraph id="par_id130920151136105" role="paragraph" xml-lang="en-US">Click 
one of the five buttons to display in the image area below a random choice of 
nine themes corresponding to the category indicated in the button.</paragraph>
 <paragraph id="par_id1309201511361079" role="paragraph" xml-lang="en-US">To 
select one of the displayed themes, click on its image and press <item 
type="menuitem">OK</item>.</paragraph>
-<paragraph id="par_id1309201511361094" role="warning" xml-lang="en-US">Since 
the themes will be fetched from the Mozilla Firefox theme website, you may have 
to wait some minutes to have all nine themes image filled. Please be 
patient.</paragraph>
+<paragraph id="par_id1309201511361094" role="warning" xml-lang="en-US">Since 
the themes will be fetched from the Mozilla Firefox theme website, you may have 
to wait some time to have all nine themes image filled. Please be 
patient.</paragraph>
 </body>
 
 </helpdocument>
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