I would suggest to upload a clean -25 to avoid other people in the IETF community or in the IESG also calling idnits and complaining ;-)
-éric From: Daniel Migault <[email protected]> Date: Wednesday, 7 December 2022 at 14:25 To: Michael Richardson <[email protected]> Cc: Eric Vyncke <[email protected]>, "[email protected]" <[email protected]>, "[email protected]" <[email protected]>, "[email protected]" <[email protected]> Subject: Re: Next actions for I-D Action: draft-ietf-homenet-front-end-naming-delegation-24.txt just one clarification: do we prefer to have a version 25 being published or should we leave it as version 24 ? Yours. Daniel On Wed, Dec 7, 2022 at 8:11 AM Daniel Migault <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>> wrote: On Wed, Dec 7, 2022 at 7:56 AM Michael Richardson <[email protected]<mailto:mcr%[email protected]>> wrote: Eric Vyncke (evyncke) <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>> wrote: > As the text has changed a lot, not so much on the technical content but > more or completeness and readability, I will re-submit it to another > IESG evaluation early January in the hope that the IESG will approve > this draft. Thank you. > May I kindly request the authors to fix the idnits issues ? > https://author-tools.ietf.org/api/idnits?url=https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-homenet-front-end-naming-delegation-24.txt > it is about a reference to RFC 6125 or its -bis and the use of > obsoleted RFC 5077. The text says: The HNA will validate the DM's control channel certificate by doing [RFC6125]/[I-D.ietf-uta-rfc6125bis] DNS-ID check on the name. The word "an" ought to be in front of [RFC6125]. I think that idnits is confused. I thought the UTA document was just a patch on RFC6125, but I see that it's a complete replacement, so referencing both makes less sense. Just removed rfc6125 As for RFC5077. I have replaced it with RFC8446 (TLS1.3), section 4.6.1, but the reference feels less useful now. -- Michael Richardson <[email protected]<mailto:mcr%[email protected]>> . o O ( IPv6 IøT consulting ) Sandelman Software Works Inc, Ottawa and Worldwide -- Daniel Migault Ericsson -- Daniel Migault Ericsson
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