Mahesh Jethanandani has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-grow-nrtm-v4-09: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Section 6.4, paragraph 3
>    *  Implementations MUST support ES256 for interoperability.  The
>       algorithm MUST NOT be Deprecated, and it is RECOMMENDED to use
>       Recommended or Recommended+ algorithms, as listed in the IANA JOSE
>       Algorithms registry [IANA_jose].

The requirement of support for ES256 is reasonable, but the document
should ensure it does not exclude future widely adopted algorithms such
as PQC once they reach recommended status. A brief future-proofing note
would be useful.

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Section 7.3, paragraph 10
>  and object class name are not case sensitive and therefore mirror clients M
>                                ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
This word is normally spelled with a hyphen.

Section 7.3, paragraph 10
> efore mirror clients MUST use case insensitive matching against their local
>                               ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
This word is normally spelled with a hyphen.

Section 8.1, paragraph 1
> ECOMMENDED to use NTP [RFC5905] synchronisation to avoid timing discrepancies
>                                 ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Do not mix variants of the same word ("synchronisation" and "synchronization")
within a single text.



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