Deb Cooley has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-grow-nrtm-v4-09: No Objection

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While I'm balloting 'no objection', I would like these comments to be carefully
considered and addressed (not necessarily changes, if I have misunderstood).

Thanks to Watson Ladd for their secdir review.

Section 5.3, bullet 4, Section 5.4, bullets 6&8:  Are these files signed?  And
if so, does the client validate the signature?  Or only the hash?  Is the hash
algorithm the one that is specified in Section 6.4?

Section 5.6:  The mirror client only verifies the signature on the Update
Notification File?  Not on the Snapshot or the Delta files?

Section 6.4:  Consider mentioning that the jose registry referenced specifies
both the hash and signature algorithm.  It might be useful to state that the
hash specified with the signature algorithm is the one that must be used.

Section 7 and 8:  I don't see anything about hashing the contents of these
files?  Much less which hash to use (the one specified in Section 6.4).

Section 11, para 3:  Doing a bit for bit comparison of a hash is not an
integrity check.  Does the Delta and/or Snapshot happen before the Update
Notification File?  If so, then that has shows where an error/attack has
occurred.

Section 11:  There should be a short paragraph that explains the risks
associated with compression algorithms.  I can help write this paragraph, if
needed.



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