Hello, Thank you for the review. Both of your comments were addressed as you suggested, in https://github.com/mxsasha/nrtmv4/pull/110/changes
Sasha On 4 Mar 2026, at 05:58, Menachem Dodge via Datatracker <[email protected]> wrote: > > > > Document: draft-ietf-grow-nrtm-v4 > Title: Near Real Time Mirroring (NRTM) version 4 > Reviewer: Menachem Dodge > Review result: Has Nits > > Hi, > > I have been selected as the Operational Directorate (opsdir) reviewer for this > Internet-Draft. > > The Operational Directorate reviews all operational and management-related > Internet-Drafts to ensure alignment with operational best practices and that > adequate operational considerations are covered. > > A complete set of _"Guidelines for Considering Operations and Management in > IETF Specifications"_ can be found at > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsawg-rfc5706bis/. > > While these comments are primarily for the Operations and Management Area > Directors (Ops ADs), the authors should consider them alongside other feedback > received. > > - Document: draft-ietf-grow-nrtm-v4-08 > > - Reviewer: Menachem Dodge > > - Review Date: 4th March 2026 > > - Intended Status: Standards Track > > --- > > ## Summary > > - Has Nits: This document is basically ready for publication but has nits that > should be considered prior to publication. > > This document specifies a one-way synchronization HTTP-based protocol for > Internet Routing Registry (IRR) records, called Near Real Time Mirroring > version 4 (NRTMv4). The protocol allows instances of IRR database servers to > mirror IRR records, specified in the Routing Policy Specification Language > (RPSL), between each other. The document specifies the role of the server and > the client. It also gives instructions as to how to act as an intermediary > server, acting both as a client and a server. > > ## Nits > > Section 3: Terminology > Issue: Replace 'A' with 'An' > > Old: --> Version A incremental number that identifies the IRR Database > at a particular point in time. Suggested: --> Version An incremental number > that identifies the IRR Database at a particular point in time. > > Section 4.2 last paragraph > > Old: --> will generate two Update Notification Files, referring two > Snapshot Files, and two sets of Delta Files each with contiguous version > numbers - all completely independent to each other, with > different session IDs > > Suggested: --> will generate two Update Notification Files, referring to two > Snapshot Files, and two sets of Delta Files each with contiguous version > numbers - all completely independent of each other, with different session IDs > > No other issues were found. > > Thank you kindly. > Menachem Dodge > > > _______________________________________________ > GROW mailing list -- [email protected] > To unsubscribe send an email to [email protected] _______________________________________________ GROW mailing list -- [email protected] To unsubscribe send an email to [email protected]
