>>>>> On Tue, 20 Jul 2021, Sam James wrote:

> -Revision: 1
> +Revision: 2

Is this supposed to be read again by users? Then it should be a new news
item (with updated date in filename) and the old item should be deleted.

> +Please note that if you last changed your password before ~2008,
> +it may using md5crypt or similar other weak mechanisms in /etc/shadow;

This should be "may be using" or "may use" I think.

s/similar other/similar/

> +a bug in PAM [0][1] may mean that you were unable to login. We recommend
> +using `passwd` to change/refresh your passwrd so it is using modern

s/passwrd/password/

Also, this is read as plain text, so maybe use double quotes instead of
accents graves.

> +methods. A new version of PAM has been added to the tree to resolve this 
> issue.

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