Ben de Groot posted on Wed, 18 Mar 2015 15:40:02 +0800 as excerpted:

> On 17 March 2015 at 23:33, Michał Górny <mgo...@gentoo.org> wrote:
>> Dnia 2015-03-15, o godz. 15:11:47 Michał Górny <mgo...@gentoo.org>
>> napisał(a):
>>
>>
>> Here's -r1:
>> [...]
> 
> I think this is really great! Just one small nitpick:
> 
>> Note that after performing this step, 32-bit applications on user's
>> system may become temporarily broken.
> 
> Make that "the user's system".

What about...

Note: 32-bit applications may be temporarily broken after this step.

Concise and to the point. =:^)

-- 
Duncan - List replies preferred.   No HTML msgs.
"Every nonfree program has a lord, a master --
and if you use the program, he is your master."  Richard Stallman


Reply via email to