On Thursday 05 January 2006 10:11, Ciaran McCreesh wrote:
>
> I might end up being offline over the weekend (and possibly for a while
> after that too...), but I'll get around to any feedback as soon as I
> can...

While it is entirely nitpicking at this point as I understand what you meant:

Under Client Side you clearly identify ${repoid} as a variable when used for 
example in the context of ``news-${repoid}.unread``. However in the following 
section, News Item Clients, you refer to ``news-repoid.unread`` and 
``news-repoid.read``, I'd just throw repoid in those cases into a ${} for 
people reading it that weren't involed in the implementaiton so that know 
that unless the repo is actually named 'repoid' no such file will exist.

Thanks and +1,

-- 
Daniel Ostrow
Gentoo Foundation Board of Trustees
Gentoo/{PPC,PPC64,DevRel}
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