commit:     9650b512e23c167d38ad20097e7aef624d6c229d
Author:     Ulrich Müller <ulm <AT> gentoo <DOT> org>
AuthorDate: Tue Aug 28 18:51:17 2018 +0000
Commit:     Ulrich Müller <ulm <AT> gentoo <DOT> org>
CommitDate: Fri Aug 31 14:40:49 2018 +0000
URL:        https://gitweb.gentoo.org/data/glep.git/commit/?id=9650b512

glep-0076: Style.

Don't use "separate" three times in one sentence.

 glep-0076.rst | 7 +++----
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/glep-0076.rst b/glep-0076.rst
index f1bedc9..3f50895 100644
--- a/glep-0076.rst
+++ b/glep-0076.rst
@@ -304,10 +304,9 @@ certified by the person providing the contribution.
 The term "free software" is used for consistency with the language
 of the Gentoo Social Contract [#SOCIAL-CONTRACT]_.
 
-The remaining changes were merely editorial.  It has been established
-that the last point is really separate from the other points, so it is
-more appropriate to separate it from the enumeration by putting it
-in a separate paragraph.
+The remaining changes were merely editorial.  The original point (d)
+is not part of the *or* statement joining the other points, so keeping
+it in a paragraph separate from the enumeration is more appropriate.
 
 
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