RyanSkraba commented on code in PR #102:
URL: https://github.com/apache/incubator/pull/102#discussion_r1168370637


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pages/faq.ad:
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@@ -55,8 +55,8 @@ project will submit an update to the entire IPMC about its 
progress in Incubatio
 - This will continue until the IPMC approves the
 project to be "graduated". After graduation, if another
 PMC sponsored the podling, it will then be transferred to
-the PMC that asked for incubation.  If the PMC was the
-Incubator itself or the Board, the Board must also approve the project to 
receive its own PMC.
+the PMC that asked for incubation.  If the PMC or the Board was the

Review Comment:
   I don't think this is quite right (or easy to parse)!  Maybe something like 
"If the IPMC or the Board sponsored the podling, the Board must also ..." ?



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