Hi, Thanks for the feedback.
> There's some spurious text at the start of the page. I’ll remove this. > Also, what does the acronym IP mean? IP = Intellectual property > - "Releases must be placed in the Apache mirror system." > Which releases are being referred to here? Source and binaries, or just > sources? The intention was source releases (but both can be placed there), I’ll update it to say that. > - "Source releases and convenience binaries need to be made from IPMC > and PPMC approved ASF releases." > As it stands, the sentence appears to be recursive. It means you can’t make a release from a random point in version control. Releases distributed on other platforms need to come from what was contained in a voted releases. Can you suggest some better wording? Perhaps simplifying to “Convenience binaries need to be made from IPMC approved ASF releases” is better? > - "Where possible it should be pointed out that Apache project make > source releases and convenience binaries are just a convenience for > end user." > Does not read well. I agree how about "Apache projects make source releases but can if needed provide convenience binaries to end users.”? Thanks, Justin --------------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, e-mail: general-unsubscr...@incubator.apache.org For additional commands, e-mail: general-h...@incubator.apache.org
