Hi Justin,

On Thu, Jan 23, 2020 at 4:01 AM Justin Mclean <jus...@classsoftware.com> wrote:
> Here the subjected text of the email to be sent out, feedback welcome:..

Looks good to me with two suggestions for clarity:

> ...The IPMC is considering removing all IPMC members that have not signed up 
> to the private list...

We are considering removing from the PMC all IPMC members who have not
signed up to the private list...

> ...you may want to consider:
> a) getting involved again
> b) retiring by sending a mail...

I'd say "leaving the IPMC" instead of "retiring".

-Bertrand

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