paulk-asert commented on a change in pull request #21: Update, simplify and 
modernise policy
URL: https://github.com/apache/incubator/pull/21#discussion_r307980767
 
 

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 File path: pages/policy/incubation.ad
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 @@ -72,25 +78,27 @@ project has yet to be fully endorsed by the ASF.
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 Podlings wishing to use a different disclaimer message MUST have the
-disclaimer approved by the Incubator PMC prior to use.
+disclaimer approved by the Incubator PMC before use.
 
 For releases, the text SHOULD be included in a separate DISCLAIMER file
 stored alongside the NOTICE and LICENSE files.
 
 === Releases
 
-See the guidelines for link:/guides/releasemanagement.html[Podling releases] 
in conjunction with this policy. Podlings are not yet fully accepted as part of 
the Apache Software Foundation. No release made by a Podling will be endorsed 
by the ASF.  Unendorsed releases may be made by Podlings subject to the 
following policy. Podlings in Incubation SHALL NOT perform any releases of 
software without the explicit approval of the Incubator PMC. Such approval 
SHALL be given only after the Incubator PMC has followed the process detailed 
in these guidelines, and SHALL NOT occur until all source has been legally 
transferred to the ASF. Therefore, should a Podling decide it wishes to perform 
a release, the Podling SHALL hold a vote on the Podling's public dev list. At 
least three +1 votes are required (see the 
http://www.apache.org/foundation/voting.html[Apache Voting Process] page). If 
the majority of all votes is positive, then the Podling SHALL send a summary of 
that vote to the Incubator's link:/howtoparticipate.html#Mailing+lists[general] 
list and formally request the Incubator PMC approve such a release. Three +1 
Incubator PMC votes are required. Below is an example showing how an incubating 
project managed this process:
+See the guidelines for link:/guides/releasemanagement.html[Podling releases] 
for good practices on making releases.
+
+Podlings are not fully accepted as part of the Apache Software Foundation. 
Podlings MUST NOT perform any releases of software without the approval of the 
Incubator PMC. When a Podling decide it wants to make an release, the Podling 
MUST hold a vote on their public dev list. At least three +1 votes are required 
(see the http://www.apache.org/foundation/voting.html[Apache Voting Process] 
page) and more +1 votes than -1 votes. If the vote passes the Podling MUST send 
a summary of that vote to the Incubator's 
link:/howtoparticipate.html#Mailing+lists[general] list and request that the 
Incubator PMC approve the release. Three +1 Incubator PMC votes are required to 
approve a release. Below is an example showing how an incubating project 
managed this process:
 
 Review comment:
   s/accepted as _part of_ the/accepted as **official projects within** the/
   s/When a Podling decide/When a Podling decide**s**/

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