On 10/23/06, robert burrell donkin <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
a final call for review for http://incubator.apache.org/guides/proposal.html before it graduates from draft status
<snip/> I suspect this will be a popular document down the road, especially with all the instruction by example in the proposal template section. Thanks for putting this together. Comments: a) Suggest pruning the line width for any content within <code> tags, which otherwise brings the horizontal scrollbar in (even for a browser window with reasonable real estate devoted to it), and consequently makes the document harder to read. b) "Initial Committers" section [1], third paragraph. First sentence seems a bit abrupt, suggest moving it to the end of the paragraph and spelling out "this and this" (participation via wiki proposal and mailing lists?) c) "Nominated Mentors" section [2], last paragraph, first sentence. In "(note the small n)", you want us to note the small m instead. d) "Sponsoring Entity" section [3] - In line with the first two bullets, the third should read "another Apache project's PMC". Would you like a patch for any of this? -Rahul [1] http://incubator.apache.org/guides/proposal.html#template-initial-committers [2] http://incubator.apache.org/guides/proposal.html#template-mentors [3] http://incubator.apache.org/guides/proposal.html#template-sponsoring-entity
- robert
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