This is very good Robert. Comments inline: robert burrell donkin wrote:
http://incubator.apache.org/guides/proposal.html is currently a draft document. i think that it's strong enough to push towards promoting it (and putting it in the indexes). feedback would be very much appreciated. as always, if anyone can see any improvements please post a patch to this list, open a JIRA or (if you have karma) dive in. but in particular please reply with feedback about: 1 presentation (is the way the content presented easily digested and understandable?)
Yup.
2 commentary (is the commentary on the template generally too long, too short or just about right?)
Seems just right to me.
3 examples (would more examples and/or long examples improve the document or (conversely) are the examples too verbose at present?)
The examples are very helpful. Definitely not too verbose!
4 style changes (blue for notes)
The styling makes it very clear whats an example and whats not. I like it. Cheers, - Dan -- Dan Diephouse (616) 971-2053 Envoi Solutions LLC http://netzooid.com --------------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, e-mail: [EMAIL PROTECTED] For additional commands, e-mail: [EMAIL PROTECTED]
