As promised yesterday, this not only improves the one case that
triggered NightStrike's note, but all cases I found in wwwdocs.
Pushed.
Gerald
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wwwdocs: *: Add a comma after "In addition" when used as transition
On the way reduce one use and simplify a sentence.
---
htdocs/gcc-12/changes.html | 4 ++--
htdocs/gcc-3.0/libgcc.html | 2 +-
htdocs/gcc-5/changes.html | 2 +-
htdocs/gcc-6/changes.html | 2 +-
htdocs/git.html | 4 ++--
htdocs/spam.html | 3 +--
6 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)
diff --git a/htdocs/gcc-12/changes.html b/htdocs/gcc-12/changes.html
index fd4062e6..c47d3285 100644
--- a/htdocs/gcc-12/changes.html
+++ b/htdocs/gcc-12/changes.html
@@ -153,7 +153,7 @@ You may also want to check out our
<ul>
<li>OpenMP 5.0 support has been extended: The <code>close</code> map
modifier and the <code>affinity</code> clause are now supported.
- In addition Fortran gained the following features which were
+ In addition, Fortran gained the following features which were
available in C and C++ before: <code>declare variant</code> is now
available, <code>depobj</code>, <code>mutexinoutset</code> and
<code>iterator</code> can now also be used with the <code>depend</code>
@@ -170,7 +170,7 @@ You may also want to check out our
<code>align</code> and <code>allocator</code> modifiers to the
<code>allocate</code> clause and the <code>atomic</code> extensions are
now available. The <code>OMP_PLACE</code> environment variable supports
- the OpenMP 5.1 features. In addition the <code>OMP_NUM_TEAMS</code> and
+ the OpenMP 5.1 features. In addition, the <code>OMP_NUM_TEAMS</code> and
<code>OMP_TEAMS_THREAD_LIMIT</code> environment variables and their
associated API routines are now supported as well as the
memory-allocation
routines added for Fortran and extended for C/C++ in OpenMP 5.1. In
diff --git a/htdocs/gcc-3.0/libgcc.html b/htdocs/gcc-3.0/libgcc.html
index d98f9b71..6143db0c 100644
--- a/htdocs/gcc-3.0/libgcc.html
+++ b/htdocs/gcc-3.0/libgcc.html
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@
<p>This page provides a summary of discussions about the pros and cons
of distributing <code>libgcc</code> as a shared library, as well as a
-static library. In addition this page details the plans regarding
+static library. In addition, it details the plans regarding
<code>libgcc</code> for the GCC 3.0 release.</p>
<h2>Issues</h2>
diff --git a/htdocs/gcc-5/changes.html b/htdocs/gcc-5/changes.html
index 201a039f..6952f866 100644
--- a/htdocs/gcc-5/changes.html
+++ b/htdocs/gcc-5/changes.html
@@ -1001,7 +1001,7 @@ are not listed here).</p>
and built-in support. It is enabled through option
<code>-mmwaitx</code>.
The instructions <code>monitorx</code> and <code>mwaitx</code>
implement the same functionality as the old <code>monitor</code>
- and <code>mwait</code> instructions. In addition <code>mwaitx</code>
+ and <code>mwait</code> instructions. In addition, <code>mwaitx</code>
adds a configurable timer. The timer value is received as third
argument and stored in register <code>%ebx</code>.</li>
</ul>
diff --git a/htdocs/gcc-6/changes.html b/htdocs/gcc-6/changes.html
index b400dd9c..0c7d2582 100644
--- a/htdocs/gcc-6/changes.html
+++ b/htdocs/gcc-6/changes.html
@@ -566,7 +566,7 @@ within strings:
and built-in support. It is enabled through option
<code>-mmwaitx</code>.
The instructions <code>monitorx</code> and <code>mwaitx</code>
implement the same functionality as the old <code>monitor</code>
- and <code>mwait</code> instructions. In addition <code>mwaitx</code>
+ and <code>mwait</code> instructions. In addition, <code>mwaitx</code>
adds a configurable timer. The timer value is received as third
argument and stored in register <code>%ebx</code>.
</li>
diff --git a/htdocs/git.html b/htdocs/git.html
index f71b451f..2543c237 100644
--- a/htdocs/git.html
+++ b/htdocs/git.html
@@ -20,8 +20,8 @@
large. That way you can pick up any version (including releases) of
GCC that is in our repository.</p>
-<p>In addition you
-can <a href="https://gcc.gnu.org/git/gitweb.cgi?p=gcc.git";>browse our
+<p>In addition, you can
+<a href="https://gcc.gnu.org/git/gitweb.cgi?p=gcc.git";>browse our
Git history online</a>.</p>
<p>(Our <a href="about.html#git">web pages are managed via Git in a
diff --git a/htdocs/spam.html b/htdocs/spam.html
index 349e70c7..43040100 100644
--- a/htdocs/spam.html
+++ b/htdocs/spam.html
@@ -45,8 +45,7 @@ avoid creating unnecessary traffic:</p>
harvested.</p></li>
</ul>
-<p>In addition may want to check out
-<a href="https://www.abuse.net";>www.abuse.net</a>.</p>
+<p>Also check out <a href="https://www.abuse.net";>www.abuse.net</a>.</p>
</body>
</html>
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