On Fri, 23 Apr 2021, Jan Hubicka wrote:
> this patch adds changesentry for IPA/LTO and FDO.

Ah, cool!  This looks fine with some minor edits.

> --- a/htdocs/gcc-11/changes.html
> +++ b/htdocs/gcc-11/changes.html
> +    <ul>
> +      <li>New IPA-modref pass was added to track side-effects of function 
> calls
> +          and improve precision of points-to-analysis. Pass can be controlled
> +       by <code>-fipa-modref</code> attribute.

"A new IPA-modref pass..." or "An IPA-modref pass..."

And simply "side effects" without a dash.

"The pass can be..."   "...by the..."

> +      <li>Identical code folding pass was significantly improved to increase 
> number of
> +       unified functions and to reduce compile-time memory use.</li>

"The identical code..."

"the number"

> +      <li>IPA-CP heuristics improved its estimation of potential usefulness 
> of
> +          known loop bounds and strides by taking into account the estimated
> +          frequency of these loops. </li>

Here I'd probably say "by taking the ... frequence of these loops into 
account".

> +      <li>LTO bytecode file format was optimized for smaller object files and
> +       faster streaming.</li>

"The LTO bytecode format..."

Thank you,
Gerald

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