Some minor changes I suggest based on going through the page.

Applied, but happy to reconsider should others feel differently.

Gerald

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--- changes.html        16 Apr 2015 07:53:38 -0000      1.108
+++ changes.html        20 Apr 2015 08:21:32 -0000
@@ -39,21 +39,21 @@
         <code>-fipa-icf</code>) has been added.  Compared to the identical
         code folding performed by the Gold linker this
         pass does not require function sections.  It also performs merging
-        before inlining so inter-procedural optimizations are aware of the
+        before inlining, so inter-procedural optimizations are aware of the
         code re-use. On the other hand not all unifications performed
         by a linker are doable by GCC which must honor
         aliasing information. During link-time optimization of Firefox,
         this pass unifies about 31000 functions, that is 14% overall.</li>
      <li>The devirtualization pass was significantly improved by adding
         better support for speculative devirtualization and dynamic type
-        detection. About 50% of virtual calls in Firefox are speculatively
-        devirtualized during link-time optimization.</li>
+        detection. About 50% of virtual calls in Firefox are now
+        speculatively devirtualized during link-time optimization.</li>
      <li>A new comdat localization pass allows the linker to eliminate more
          dead code in presence of C++ inline functions.</li>
      <li>Virtual tables are now optimized. Local aliases are used to reduce
         dynamic linking time of C++ virtual tables on ELF targets and
         data alignment has been reduced to limit data segment bloat.</li>
-     <li>A new <code>-fno-semantic-interposition</code> flag can be used
+     <li>A new <code>-fno-semantic-interposition</code> option can be used
         to improve code quality of shared libraries where interposition of
         exported symbols is not allowed.</li>
      <li>Write-only variables are now detected and optimized out.</li>
@@ -80,14 +80,14 @@
          <code>-flto-odr-type-merging</code>.</li>
        <li><p>Command-line optimization and target options are now streamed on
          a per-function basis and honored by the link-time optimizer.
-         This change makes the link-time optimization a more transparent
+         This change makes link-time optimization a more transparent
          replacement of per-file optimizations.
          It is now possible to build projects that require
          different optimization
          settings for different translation units (such as
          <code>-ffast-math</code>, <code>-mavx</code>, or
          <code>-finline</code>).
-         Contrary to the earlier GCC releases, the optimization and target
+         Contrary to earlier GCC releases, the optimization and target
          options passed on the link command line are ignored.</p>
          <p>Note that this applies only to those command-line options
          that can be passed to <code>optimize</code> and

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