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On Tue, 18 Feb 2014, Tobias Burnus wrote:
> is the wording okay - and/or do you have further suggestions?

Here are some suggestions on top of the existing text.

Remove a comma and break a long sentence in the SIMD section.
Use "least significant" instead of "last significant" when
refering to rounding and simplify a sentence in the Fortran
section.

I have not committed this yet since the sentence on rounding
really feels rather weird.  Should there be something like
"whereas compatible would round..." (as opposed to "rounds")?

Gerald

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diff -u -r1.85 changes.html
--- changes.html        8 Apr 2015 10:33:06 -0000       1.85
+++ changes.html        12 Apr 2015 21:47:26 -0000
@@ -127,11 +127,11 @@
        >OpenMP specification</a> is now supported in the C and C++ compilers
        and starting with the 4.9.1 release also in the Fortran compiler.
        The new <code>-fopenmp-simd</code> option can be used to enable OpenMP's
-       SIMD directives, while ignoring other OpenMP directives. The new <a
+       SIMD directives while ignoring other OpenMP directives. The new <a
        
href="https://gcc.gnu.org/onlinedocs/gcc-4.9.2/gcc/Optimize-Options.html#index-fsimd-cost-model-908";
        ><code>-fsimd-cost-model=</code></a> option permits to tune the
        vectorization cost model for loops annotated with OpenMP and Cilk
-       Plus <code>simd</code> directives; <code>-Wopenmp-simd</code> warns when
+       Plus <code>simd</code> directives. <code>-Wopenmp-simd</code> warns when
        the current cost model overrides simd directives set by the user.</li>
     <li>The <code>-Wdate-time</code> option has been added for the C, C++ and
        Fortran compilers, which warns when the <code>__DATE__</code>,
@@ -459,9 +459,9 @@
         <code>strtod</code> honours the rounding mode. (For output, rounding is
         supported since GCC 4.5.) Note that for input, the
         <code>compatible</code> rounding mode is handled as 
<code>nearest</code>
-        (i.e., for a tie, rounding to an even last significant
-        [cf. IEC 60559:1989] &ndash; while <code>compatible</code> rounds away
-        from zero for a tie).</li>
+        (i.e., rounding to an even least significant [cf. IEC 60559:1989]
+        for a tie, while <code>compatible</code> rounds away from zero in
+        that case).</li>
     </ul></li>
   </ul>
 

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