Francesco Romani has posted comments on this change.

Change subject: userportal, webadmin: VM console key management
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Patch Set 20:

(9 comments)

Thanks for the review!

https://gerrit.ovirt.org/#/c/35810/20/frontend/webadmin/modules/gwt-common/src/main/java/org/ovirt/engine/ui/common/widget/uicommon/popup/vm/PublicKeyPopupWidget.ui.xml
File 
frontend/webadmin/modules/gwt-common/src/main/java/org/ovirt/engine/ui/common/widget/uicommon/popup/vm/PublicKeyPopupWidget.ui.xml:

Line 3: <ui:UiBinder xmlns:ui="urn:ui:com.google.gwt.uibinder" 
xmlns:g="urn:import:com.google.gwt.user.client.ui"
Line 4:              
xmlns:ge="urn:import:org.ovirt.engine.ui.common.widget.editor.generic">
Line 5: 
Line 6:     <ui:style 
type="org.ovirt.engine.ui.common.widget.uicommon.popup.vm.PublicKeyPopupWidget.Style">
Line 7:         .content {
> why do you have all of this empty styles here? Id say you could just delete
Done
Line 8: 
Line 9:         }
Line 10: 
Line 11:         .publicKeyEditor {


Line 20: 
Line 21:         }
Line 22:     </ui:style>
Line 23: 
Line 24:     <g:VerticalPanel verticalAlignment="ALIGN_MIDDLE" 
addStyleNames="{style.content}">
> please use FlowPanel instead - VerticalPanel renders as <table> and we are 
Done
Line 25:         <ge:StringEntityModelTextAreaEditor ui:field="publicKeyEditor" 
addStyleNames="{style.publicKeyEditor}" />
Line 26:     </g:VerticalPanel>
Line 27: 


https://gerrit.ovirt.org/#/c/35810/20/frontend/webadmin/modules/uicommonweb/src/main/java/org/ovirt/engine/ui/uicommonweb/models/PublicKeyModel.java
File 
frontend/webadmin/modules/uicommonweb/src/main/java/org/ovirt/engine/ui/uicommonweb/models/PublicKeyModel.java:

Line 1: package org.ovirt.engine.ui.uicommonweb.models;
Line 2: 
Line 3: public class PublicKeyModel extends Model {
Line 4: 
Line 5:     EntityModel<String> textInput;
> private EntityModel...
Done
Line 6: 
Line 7:     public EntityModel<String> getTextInput() {
Line 8:         return textInput;
Line 9:     }


https://gerrit.ovirt.org/#/c/35810/20/frontend/webadmin/modules/uicommonweb/src/main/java/org/ovirt/engine/ui/uicommonweb/models/userportal/UserPortalListModel.java
File 
frontend/webadmin/modules/uicommonweb/src/main/java/org/ovirt/engine/ui/uicommonweb/models/userportal/UserPortalListModel.java:

Line 545:         model.setHelpTag(HelpTag.edit_public_key);
Line 546: 
Line 547:         
model.getCommands().add(UICommand.createDefaultOkUiCommand("OnSetConsoleKey", 
this)); //$NON-NLS-1$
Line 548:         
model.getCommands().add(UICommand.createCancelUiCommand("Cancel", this)); 
//$NON-NLS-1$
Line 549: 
> here you should call "model.startProgress(null)" (to show the loading indic
Done
Line 550:         AsyncDataProvider.getInstance().getUserProfile(new 
AsyncQuery(model,
Line 551:                 new INewAsyncCallback() {
Line 552:                     @Override
Line 553:                     public void onSuccess(Object target, Object 
returnValue) {


Line 550:         AsyncDataProvider.getInstance().getUserProfile(new 
AsyncQuery(model,
Line 551:                 new INewAsyncCallback() {
Line 552:                     @Override
Line 553:                     public void onSuccess(Object target, Object 
returnValue) {
Line 554:                         UserProfile profile = ((VdcQueryReturnValue) 
returnValue).getReturnValue();
> I'd say this is NPE vulnerable since the profile could be null
Added if() to check against nullness
Line 555:                         
model.getTextInput().setEntity(profile.getSshPublicKey());
Line 556:                     }
Line 557:                 }));
Line 558:     }


Line 551:                 new INewAsyncCallback() {
Line 552:                     @Override
Line 553:                     public void onSuccess(Object target, Object 
returnValue) {
Line 554:                         UserProfile profile = ((VdcQueryReturnValue) 
returnValue).getReturnValue();
Line 555:                         
model.getTextInput().setEntity(profile.getSshPublicKey());
> and here "model.stopProgress()"
Done
Line 556:                     }
Line 557:                 }));
Line 558:     }
Line 559: 


Line 559: 
Line 560:     private void onSetConsoleKey() {
Line 561: 
Line 562:         final PublicKeyModel model = (PublicKeyModel) getWindow();
Line 563: 
> here should be a check if the something is not going on in the model on bac
Done
Line 564:         final String publicKey = model.getTextInput().getEntity();
Line 565: 
Line 566:         model.startProgress(null);
Line 567: 


Line 569:                 new INewAsyncCallback() {
Line 570:                     @Override
Line 571:                     public void onSuccess(Object target, Object 
returnValue) {
Line 572:                         UserProfile profile = ((VdcQueryReturnValue) 
returnValue).getReturnValue();
Line 573:                         VdcActionType action = (profile != null) 
?VdcActionType.UpdateUserProfile :VdcActionType.AddUserProfile;
> just a nit - please add space between "?" and "VdcAc..". The same with ":"
Done
Line 574: 
Line 575:                         Frontend.getInstance().runAction(action, new 
UserProfileParameters(publicKey),
Line 576:                                 new IFrontendActionAsyncCallback() {
Line 577:                                     @Override


https://gerrit.ovirt.org/#/c/35810/20/frontend/webadmin/modules/uicommonweb/src/main/java/org/ovirt/engine/ui/uicommonweb/models/vms/VmListModel.java
File 
frontend/webadmin/modules/uicommonweb/src/main/java/org/ovirt/engine/ui/uicommonweb/models/vms/VmListModel.java:

Line 1751:                     }
Line 1752:                 }, model);
Line 1753:     }
Line 1754: 
Line 1755:     private void editConsoleKey() {
> well, this is copy / pasted from UserPortalListModel. Please move this logi
Ops. Will refactor and remove/minimize (at least!) duplication.
Line 1756: 
Line 1757:         final PublicKeyModel model = new PublicKeyModel();
Line 1758: 
Line 1759:         setWindow(model);


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