Hi Vijay,

Thank you for your review! I've included all your suggestions (but used "ideal" instead 
of "normal" operating conditions): 
https://github.com/peterthomassen/draft-ietf-dnsop-cds-consistency/commit/53d48b76d83cb09fb1cc3f940764dbdc23a1a086

A new revision will be submitted after Last Call has ended.

Best,
Peter


On 10/15/25 18:08, Vijay Gurbani via Datatracker wrote:
Document: draft-ietf-dnsop-cds-consistency
Title: Clarifications on CDS/CDNSKEY and CSYNC Consistency
Reviewer: Vijay Gurbani
Review result: Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-dnsop-cds-consistency-09
Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
Review Date: 2025-10-15
IETF LC End Date: 2025-10-29
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: This I-D is ready to be published as a Standards Track RFC.

Major issues: 0

Minor issues: 0

Nits/editorial comments: 3
- Abstract: s/parent-side entities has to/parent-side entities have to/ OR
s/parent-side entities has to/parent-side entity has to/ - Abstract:
s/nameservers, before/nameservers before/ - Section 1: s/works fine when all is
in order./works well under normal operating scenarios./


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