Hello Gedare,

thanks for the review. I tried to fix most of the issues in v2.

On 06/08/2020 18:57, Gedare Bloom wrote:
+Generate Content after Changes
+^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
+
+Once you are done with the modifications of an existing item or the creation of
The rest of this document is in the third person or second-person
understood (meaning, we never say "you" but it is understood that
"you" do the things). It may be more consistent to remove these "you":

Chris was also not that happy about this "you" style which I have from:

https://plainlanguage.gov/

Since I used this also elsewhere I would like to keep it for now.

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