kkoli...@apache.org wrote:
>Author: kkolinko >Date: Sat Jun 9 15:15:54 2012 >New Revision: 1348425 > >URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?rev=1348425&view=rev >-(1) Download and Install the Java SE Runtime Environment (JRE) >+(1) Download and Install Java SE Runtime Environment (JRE) That change is worse grammatically. Reinstating "the" would be good. Using "a" rather than "the" would be better since there is more than one JRE. Using "a JRE" rather than "the JRE" is probably a better choice for most of the file. The same goes for JDK. > b) Do a simple build and use the "output/build" directory as > "CATALINA_HOME". Be warned that there are some differences between >- contents of "output/build" and the official "release" >distributive. >+ contents of "output/build" directory and full "release" >distributive. s/distributive/distribution/ >+Tomcat itself is a Java application and does not use environment >variables. "itself" is unnecessary here. >+JRE_HOME variable is used to specify location of a JRE or JDK that is >used >+to start Tomcat. That is not consistent with what follows... >+JAVA_HOME variable is used to specify location of a JDK. It is used >instead >+of JRE_HOME. >+(3.3) Other variables (optional) >+ >+There exist other environment variables, besides the four described >above. >+See the comment at the top of catalina.bat or catalina.sh scripts for >+the list and description of them. >+ >+One frequently used variable is CATALINA_OPTS. It allows to specify >+additional options for java command that starts Tomcat. Compare to JAVA_OPTS here maybe? >+ >+See Java documentation for options that affect Java Runtime >Environment. See the Java ... >+See System Properties page in Configuration Reference for system >properties Need more "the"s See the System... in the Configuration ... for the system ... >+By default setenv script file is absent. If setenv script is present ...default the setenv ... If the setenv ... Mark --------------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, e-mail: dev-unsubscr...@tomcat.apache.org For additional commands, e-mail: dev-h...@tomcat.apache.org
