> Date: Tue, 18 Dec 2012 07:33:22 -0800
> From: [email protected]
> Subject: Re: Blog post
> To: [email protected]
>
> ...
> ----- Messaggio originale -----
> >
> >Grammar weenie:
> >
> > "produce very limited results but" -> "produce very limited
> > results, but"
> >
> > "dangerously such random" -> "dangerously such a random"
> >
> > "well documented algorithms but" -> "well documented
> > algorithms, but"
> >
> > "used by Microsoft, after" -> "used by Microsoft; after"
> >
> > "not complex the implementation" -> "not complex; the
> > implementation"
> >
>
> All these are welcome.
>
> > "first in Apache OpenOffice than other in Office Suites" ->
> > "first in
> > Apache OpenOffice earlier than other Office Suites" (was this your
> > intended meaning?)
> >
>
> Not really..
> Hmm .. perhaps "earlier in Apache OpenOffice with respect to other Office
> Suites".
>
>
> No pun intended there: MS-Office got it first but it is not prime quality.
>
> Gnumeric implemented Mersenne Twister which has some better characteristics
> long ago.
>
> Pedro.
Could it be...?
"is not that we got this code developed first in Apache OpenOffice
than other in Office Suites" ->
"is not that we got this code developed first in Apache OpenOffice
than in any other office suite"
I'm not a native speaker, so I can't guarantee, but it "reads" better to me ;)
Regards,
Manuel
