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ASF GitHub Bot commented on GEODE-2513:
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Github user PivotalSarge commented on a diff in the pull request:

    https://github.com/apache/geode-native/pull/75#discussion_r108496561
  
    --- Diff: 
docs/geode-native-docs/dotnet-caching-api/implementing-igfserializable.html.md.erb
 ---
    @@ -31,21 +31,21 @@ Examples follow the procedure.
         void ToData(DataOutput output)
         ```
     
    -    The `ToData` function is responsible for copying all of the data 
fields for the object to the object stream. The `DataOutput` class represents 
the output stream and provides methods for writing the primitives in a network 
byte order. For details, see the API documentation for `DataOutput` at 
[http://gemfire-apis.docs.pivotal.io](http://gemfire-apis.docs.pivotal.io).
    +    The `ToData` function is responsible for copying all of the data 
fields for the object to the object stream. The `DataOutput` class represents 
the output stream and provides methods for writing the primitives in a network 
byte order.
     
     2.  Implement the `FromData` function that consumes a data input stream 
and repopulates the data fields for the object:
     
         ``` pre
         void fromData (DataInput& input)
         ```
     
    -    The `DataInput` class represents the input stream and provides methods 
for reading input elements. The `FromData` function must read the elements of 
the input stream in the same order that they were written by `ToData`. For more 
about this, see the API documentation for `DataInput` at 
[http://gemfire-apis.docs.pivotal.io](http://gemfire-apis.docs.pivotal.io).
    +    The `DataInput` class represents the input stream and provides methods 
for reading input elements. The `FromData` function must read the elements of 
the input stream in the same order that they were written by `ToData`.
     
     3.  Implement the `ClassId` function to return an integer which is unique 
for your class (in the set of all of your user-defined classes).
     
     ## Simple BankAccount Class
     
    -This example shows a simple class, `BankAccount`, that encapsulates two 
`ints`: `customerId` and `accountId`:
    +This example shows a simple class, `BankAccount`, that encapsulates the 
two `ints` `customerId` and `accountId`:
    --- End diff --
    
    Maybe a comma between `ints` and `customerId`?


> Geode Native docs: rebrand to match open-source software
> --------------------------------------------------------
>
>                 Key: GEODE-2513
>                 URL: https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/GEODE-2513
>             Project: Geode
>          Issue Type: Improvement
>          Components: docs
>            Reporter: Dave Barnes
>
> The newly-contributed Geode Native doc sources contain some GemFire artifacts 
> that have been purged from the open-source code. Docs should be updated to 
> match. 



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