Fix grammar, spelling and formatting of DPDK 22.07 release notes.
Signed-off-by: John McNamara <john.mcnam...@intel.com>
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Note, I haven't removed the empty sections or the boilerplate text.
doc/guides/rel_notes/release_22_07.rst | 49 ++++++++++++++++++--------
1 file changed, 35 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)
diff --git a/doc/guides/rel_notes/release_22_07.rst
b/doc/guides/rel_notes/release_22_07.rst
index d3732a3d10..d70379e325 100644
--- a/doc/guides/rel_notes/release_22_07.rst
+++ b/doc/guides/rel_notes/release_22_07.rst
@@ -55,10 +55,10 @@ New Features
Also, make sure to start the actual text at the margin.
=======================================================
-* **Added initial RISC-V architecture support.***
+* **Added initial RISC-V architecture support.**
Added EAL implementation for RISC-V architecture.
- The initial device the porting was tested on is
+ The initial device the porting was tested on was
a HiFive Unmatched development board based on the SiFive Freedom U740 SoC.
In theory this implementation should work
with any ``rv64gc`` ISA compatible implementation
@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@ New Features
(seqlock). A seqlock allows for low overhead, parallel reads. The
DPDK seqlock uses a spinlock to serialize multiple writing threads.
-* ** Added function get random floating point number.**
+* **Added function get random floating point number.**
Added the function ``rte_drand()`` to provide a pseudo-random
floating point number.
@@ -87,7 +87,7 @@ New Features
* **Added Rx queue available descriptors threshold and event.**
Added ethdev API and corresponding driver operations to set Rx queue
- available descriptors threshold and query for queues with reached
+ available descriptors threshold and query for queues that have reached the
threshold when a new event ``RTE_ETH_EVENT_RX_AVAIL_THRESH`` is received.
* **Added telemetry for module EEPROM.**
@@ -102,22 +102,22 @@ New Features
* **Added vhost API to get the number of in-flight packets.**
Added an API which can get the number of in-flight packets in
- vhost async data path without using lock.
+ the vhost async data path without using lock.
* **Added vhost async dequeue API to receive packets from guest.**
Added vhost async dequeue API which can leverage DMA devices to
- accelerate receiving packets from guest.
- Split virtqueue and packed virtqueue are both supported.
+ accelerate receiving packets from a guest.
+ Both split and packed virtqueues are supported.
* **Added thread-safe version of in-flight packet clear API in vhost library.**
Added an API which can clear the in-flight packets submitted to
- the async channel in a thread-safe manner in the vhost async data path.
+ the async channel in a thread-safe manner, in the vhost async data path.
* **Added vhost API to get the device type of a vDPA device.**
- Added an API which can get the device type of vDPA device.
+ Added an API which can get the device type of vDPA devices.
* **Updated NVIDIA mlx5 vDPA driver.**
@@ -126,9 +126,9 @@ New Features
* Added new devargs option ``max_conf_threads``
defining the number of management threads for parallel configurations.
-* **Updated Amazon ena driver.**
+* **Updated Amazon ENA driver.**
- The new driver version (v2.7.0) includes:
+ Updated the Amazon ENA driver version to v2.7.0 with new features:
* Added fast mbuf free feature support.
* Added ``enable_llq`` device argument for controlling the PMD LLQ
@@ -136,16 +136,22 @@ New Features
* **Updated Atomic Rules' Arkville PMD.**
+ Updated the Atomic Rules' Arkville PMD with the following changes:
+
* A firmware version update to Arkville 22.07 is required.
* Added support for Atomic Rules PCI device IDs ``0x101a, 0x101b, 0x101c``.
* Added PMD support for virtual functions and vfio_pci driver.
* **Updated HiSilicon hns3 driver.**
+ Updated the HiSilicon hns3 driver with the following change:
+
* Added support for backplane media type.
* **Updated Intel iavf driver.**
+ Updated the Intel iavf driver with the following changes:
+
* Added Tx QoS queue rate limitation support.
* Added quanta size configuration support.
* Added ``DEV_RX_OFFLOAD_TIMESTAMP`` support.
@@ -153,6 +159,8 @@ New Features
* **Updated Intel ice driver.**
+ Updated the Intel ice driver with the following changes:
+
* Added support for RSS RETA configure in DCF mode.
* Added support for RSS HASH configure in DCF mode.
* Added support for MTU configure in DCF mode.
@@ -166,10 +174,12 @@ New Features
* **Updated Intel igc driver.**
Added Intel Foxville I226 devices in ``igc`` driver.
- See the doc:`../nics/igc` NIC guide for more details.
+ See the :doc:`../nics/igc` NIC guide for more details.
* **Updated Mellanox mlx5 driver.**
+ Updated Mellanox mlx5 driver with the following changes:
+
* Added support for promiscuous mode on Windows.
* Added support for MTU on Windows.
* Added matching and RSS on IPsec ESP.
@@ -180,11 +190,15 @@ New Features
* **Updated Netronome nfp driver.**
+ Updated Netronome nfp driver with the following changes:
+
* Added support for NFP3800 NIC.
* Added support for firmware with NFDk.
* **Updated VMware vmxnet3 networking driver.**
+ Updated VMware vmxnet3 networking driver with the following changes:
+
* Added version 5 support.
* Added RETA query and RETA update support.
* Added version 6 support with some new features:
@@ -196,6 +210,8 @@ New Features
* **Updated Wangxun ngbe driver.**
+ Updated Wangxun ngbe driver with the following changes:
+
* Added support for yt8531s PHY.
* Added support for OEM subsystem vendor ID.
* Added autoneg on/off for external PHY SFI mode.
@@ -203,6 +219,8 @@ New Features
* **Updated Wangxun txgbe driver.**
+ Updated Wangxun txgbe driver with the following changes:
+
* Added support for OEM subsystem vendor ID.
* **Added Elliptic Curve Diffie-Hellman (ECDH) algorithm in cryptodev.**
@@ -217,12 +235,15 @@ New Features
* **Updated Marvell cnxk crypto driver.**
+ Updated the Marvell cnxk crypto driver with the following changes:
+
* Added AH mode support in lookaside protocol (IPsec) for CN9K & CN10K.
* Added AES-GMAC support in lookaside protocol (IPsec) for CN9K & CN10K.
* **Updated Intel QuickAssist Technology (QAT) crypto PMD.**
- * Added support for secp384r1 elliptic curve.
+ Updated Intel QuickAssist Technology (QAT) crypto PMD for add
+ support for secp384r1 elliptic curve.
* **Added Intel ACC101 baseband PMD.**
@@ -241,7 +262,7 @@ New Features
* **Added new queues attributes weight and affinity in eventdev.**
- Defined new event queue attributes weight and affinity as below:
+ Defined new event queue attributes weight and affinity:
* ``RTE_EVENT_QUEUE_ATTR_WEIGHT``
* ``RTE_EVENT_QUEUE_ATTR_AFFINITY``
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