On 1/19/07, Thien <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
Thanks Helma,
A little explanation to the visuals.
1. Typical masthead design, the dark area has the word "cocoon" drawn in
a Lego-like look .
I like this one a lot but the "cocoon" is hard to see on a color
matched monitor with the contrast and brightness correctly set, I
think you need to bump up the contrast.
2. Tried a few other colors, find that green match quite well with the
logo's blue, here's a simple and nice layout, with a bit of Web2.0 touch
The green seems a bit too bright for me, I like the bottom blue area.
The bottom blue with the tag line might make a very good combination
if combined with the top bar from number 1.
3. Trying to describe the lightness and agility of cocoon with randomly
positioned square that can be taken out or repositioned without
affecting each other....ok, maybe not too obvious :D
Sort of neat, a little bit too pastel for me, maybe try it with
slightly bolder colors? Where do you envision the "Search" going on
this one?
4. Cocoon and nature, probably not the most appropriate association, but
I wish this tells something about the framework's being easy and
friendly to use.
Interesting, a little heavy on the left hand side, maybe the Cocoon
logo could move, or the hills and cluds could be more evenly
distributed? It seems to take up maybe just a bit too much vertical
real estate.
Some modifications need to be made to the left navigation to match the
new masthead, once it has been chosen.
I've been critiquing this kind of stuff for too many years, so don't
take me too seriously, it seems to be a habit to nit pick this kinds
of stuff to death... Overall I've got to say that you've done some
really good work heref, I'm impressed.
--
Peter Hunsberger
