On Sun, May 10, 2009 at 02:38:40AM +0200, Stephane Glondu wrote:
> > Please improve the long descriptions, some hints: [...]
> What about:
Good!, finally I understand (without having to look at the library
itself) what ocaml-text does :-)
> >> OCaml-Text is designed to be easy to use and interacts well with
> >> other projects.
> > Is this line useful? "interacts well with other projects" sounds like
> > marketing and nothing else ...
> What's wrong with marketing? :-)
That its S/N is 0 :-) I've nothing against marketing, which is
arguably also part of a software description, but it should provide
info. Saying "other projects" is pretty useless to me: either you
mention which projects are compatible with ocaml-text or you explain
what of ocaml-text makes it "easy to interoperate" (or you drop the
sentence :-))
Cheers.
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